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Rustyman65over 13 years agoGood Start
Please continue the story with the relationship that developes.
catman71over 13 years agocan go further
her background, his families reaction, other fall out, more please
Anonymousover 13 years agoLove this but I want to know more..
More about Emma's parents, their children, and Michael and Emma. Basically, you could write about everyone!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoMIDDLE STORY
Seems like this should be the middle of the story.Nothing about their meeting,,family hsitory,jobs,,,just seems like a very strange place to begin a story.
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