All Comments on 'Home for Christmas'

This story was very well written and erotic to the extreme. There was so much sexual tension building up between the siblings and it took the reader along for the ride. The sexual scene was intense without being overdone or lacking realism. Five full stars!

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Very well done.

Well done my friend

Not only very hot and erotic, but very sweet and loving.

The only thing is that he's going to have to leave his new found lover to go back to school .

Very well written and edited.

A pleasure to read, and I loved the storyline.

Thanks for the great read.

I hope there is more to cum from these two

ava is to much of a tease, there is no way he would want anything to do with her the way she was hanging all over aron. if anything it would make him avoid and ignore her antil he could go back to college. this needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER. if you had spread it out over months or years it may have been good but as is it was just to rushed and unbelievable.

the way ava was all over aron there is no way in hell bret would want anything to do with her the rest of the holiday. if anything he would avoid and ignore her at all costs. this drivel would have been better left unposted.

sexy incest story-nice people, nicely written thanks

The Aaron character annoyed me, I disliked Ava in part because she was flirting with him and the Carrie character did nothing to improve the story. Mostly I felt sorry for Brett and thought he was a bit lame.

Short and hot.

You keep telling really nice, sexy short stories. I don't expect to enjoy the nonhuman genre, so you can feel free to think I'm biased, but I think you'd be wrong.

Congratulations on your abilities! Thanks for sharing.

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

With friends like Aaron who needs enemies