All Comments on 'Home for the Holidays'

Loved it from beginning to end. Please write more like this one. You do it very well

Jesus christ how is it immoral? Wtf?

I am surprised they didn't get married. There is no blood relation and there was a deep connection.

Well written! Surprise ending, wondered if marriage was in future.

Spoiled by the crap about the pill he should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

what an idiot! sis asked him early on to touch her and I thought she would have to teach him what a pussy was. he likes big sagging tits. "natural" D cup tits sag EVEN on young girls... THAT'S REALITY...I prefer A' over D's all day long.

Very real and sexy im glad you put in the pill bit as it made as if it was actually happening 5 stars

Story was well written and I'm sure that a lot of readers will enjoy it. For me, I like some emotional love in sibling incest stories. What is the point of writing a sibling incest story if it's just about sex between the siblings. What makes a good sibling incest story is the love aspect that's what rounds the story off.

My other gripe with these stories is the characters desperate need to relate to each other the number of partners they had sex with. When I'm with a women I really don't want to know how many others she has been with or how/where she gained her oral/sexual experience.

Gapster delivers again. Good characters and realistic scenarios, terrific read. Enjoy your work immensely.

This was a great story, slow build and great 'climax'.

But the last 3 paragraphs spoilt it for me.

Sorry.........

Rapier

This is a great story and i never cease to be amazed by those who can find fault with good stories taking cheap shots at the author’s work.

I laughed out loud very hard at this==> "Then I reared back and began to fuck my baby step-sister like this was the normal thing step siblings do to one another over the holidays. "

Brilliant , loved it.

If Lanie had been an ebony chic that would have made the story perfect.....I love the chatte noire

good story, lousy epilogue

It was going great until the end....going separate ways totally fucked up a hot story....now it's just meh