All Comments on 'Hot Summer Night Ch. 02'

Tried to give your story 5 stars several times, but while it will light up it won't stay lit. Might want to contact Literotica to find out what's the matter with their voting system.

Keep writing! Rating system is working now.

and keep after this story line. Seems "Gail" didn't really get her chance either...

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When it rains, it pours? Chicken one day, feathers the next? More pussy than you can shake a stick at! Keep going!

Dude i hate you...you got more pussy in one day then i did in all 4 yrs of high school... keep it going it does bring back some great memories of high school.

Fun story, though I wish he got to fuck Julia during the big orgy party. Maybe later he'll have some alone time with her, perhaps? A little bondage fun would be cool, too.

We need more chapters. Then you can name the twins & get Gail involved.

I just remembered something! Julia, Didn't your mother chaperone last years party? She just smiled and walked into her room.

Hot story but pretty unrealistic for a guy in his 40s to have that many orgasms (7) in one day. It also got kind of annoying with the way the author wouldn't put names to some of the women (long haired twin, short haired twin, Hannah's mom). Interested in seeing if the other chapters are like this.

Lol, love the second most recent comment as an addendum, hehehe.

The story fucking rocked :) Ive been hitting a lot of duds lately, lol. ...and I really loved the twins!!

I dont have a problem with the the names like the other guy did, it was fairly realistic... Besides he wasnt using his real name, so why bother? ...that and, I dont know about everyone else, but I have a shitty memory when it comes to names, so I prolly would have done the same thing. Well, I would have gotten the twins names and numbers before they left! Those two would be spending weekends from time to time!!

All in all, pretty good job! Thanks for writing!

...oh, dont know about others, but when I hit forty I could still get it up and cum five times a day, without my dick hurting, so if I had proper motivation I dont see why not seven. Not sure how long between times, certainly a decent bit more recovery than in my twenties, but back then if I kept fucking after I came I could usually not go down and get it hard in short order. Might be able to still do that, if I wasnt so tired after the first round, lol.

Great ans was written very good, it would be great to have a party like this. The story was great in detail and how it was written. Keep writing good story's like this.

can't imagine cumin that many times, would like to try though

I was excited for such a long series but man am I dropping this! The dude's daughter is a slut, even if he is fucking her I don't get how he'd be okay with that he eats somebody else's cum out of her cunt and apparently virgins will go to orgies. Just really dumb and unrealistic.

AWESOME Fucking

So many Dorks and only a few sharp guys.

All the Girls were AWESOME.

I wish I was there

Can’t wait for the next w

that part where mark flipped the twins to 69 while standing had feeling so horny . fucking strength kink.

Awesome!