by Erlikkhan
Please ignore the silly sniping from idiots like this guy who dislikes ellipsis. You are one of the greatest here, please give us, your loyal fans, more!
Usually read these with a chuckle... This got my panties damp.
I like stories with some plot, rather than 'once and done' type of things, and this one hit the mark in that respect. However... I skimmed through page 4, because the scene with the cops was an instant turn-off.
Very good otherwise, though!
Keep up the good writing : )
The first part with just her and Ron was really good, the orgy was okay, but I thought the police was stretching it just a little too far. good descriptions in the first part, but kinda lost that quality in the end.
it's really hot and i wanted to experience those things too..mmmmmmmmmm FUCK ME!
Loves this story, but as some pointed out the scene with the cops didn't fit. Would've been better if one of the cops fucked her while the other waited outside unaware of what's happening inside. That would've been hot. But my biggest problem with this is it needs a sequel! Come on, Denise needs to know she lost the battle AND the war. Give us an ending to this amazing story.
What an ending to be fucked by a black cock---not much else Cheryl has to try. A hot story.
I enjoy a good sex story, however I think rape is violence and not at all sexy. To each his own, but glorifying violence against women seems without merit or benefit to society.
I thought this is a good story. I hope it continues.
..Well written, thank you very much. But having an orgasm from getting her tit fondled stretched belief too far.