by marriedpervs
Another awesome 'submission'. Well done guys would love to see Dee pose in the leather boots.
Vert orginal. Women will love it.i know because I bookmarked it. I had my very young gf(38) read it to with my cock in her cunt as we sipped cava she loved it but thougt it was too short. She would have liked ten more pages. She came twice reading it. I hope I had a little to do with it. write a longer nastier story for. she would love it if this took place in front of a large crowd,
You are soooo hot! Pictures! Even if I was blind I would want them!
Wonderful story. Nicely written and now I need to clen up.
OK you have great story going on and now....
heres the last line..
her newly dyed black hair now on disguise at all.
Please edit!
Iv read a LOT of hot stories in my time, but iv never read anything quite as sexy and filthy as yours. You should consider turning professional. Would love some pics tho mark_plaine@hotmail.co.uk
i loved ur storie it was very exiting and now iim all wet ...loved it and hope there will be part 3
Loved it, I have tried a little bondage before, but never thought to book in as a couple for "lessons", it is now on my to do list. Thanks for the inspiration Dee.
After all that I would have spread her ass cheeks wide and licked and sucked her battered asshole.
Was Steve REALLY that dumb? The minute she struck him with the whip he would have been gone and this nonsense would have been over and done with before it even started. And even then I think he would have left. Not much communication going on between he and his wife. And I don't think any man, no matter how dumb he was, would torture a woman like that. This was simply an implausible pile of garbage.
PS - get an editor. Too many mistakes like "her newly dyed black hair now on disguise
at all"? Really? At least do a better job with your proof reading.
fuck me that was so sexy, I love your imagination! That’s definitely a helluva turn on, think perhaps I should wake my husband up. I’m guessing others may have pointed it out - I haven’t read the comments - but the only think that struck me as incongruous was that hubby didn’t seem to know what the safe word was all about. Other than that I absolutely loved it thank you!
I thought it was very good.and would have loved doing that with my wife minus getting whip on my ass. I give i dont take. Prefer to do the paddling and have more then once.....was very hot.
Well, that was a short and very hot story. Sometimes just a story like this is what is needed to make a boring day a whole lot better. I am kind of surprised that he did not know his wife's body and much as he should have. I would have liked a little more interaction between him and Dee as they settled down from the intense playtime. What were her thoughts as she was being beaten and raped on the frame? Did she get out of the session as much as she wanted or more? What would have caused her to yell out her safe word? I am so glad that there was a safe word discussed and it was not "red". Was there any aftercare provided by the madam and/or her husband? Did she get some soothing cream on her whip marks? Did she get a nice warm bath for her troubles? Did her husband carry her out to their car and home to their bed?