All Comments on 'Hunted'

You're a good writer, but this story is to simple for words.

This was another well written story with plenty of action!! I really enjoyed the way he gets them to do what he wants without them even realizing what they've done. Very sneaky. ;) I again have to say I've added this to my collection of stories to read over and over and ... ah hem ... enjoy many times. ;) A++++

The coach seems a tad unethical, even if the girls are 18. But it's a fun read, not reality, and as such it is well done. Five stars from me.

" A tad unethical" is an understatement. The only thing missing from this story is "statutory rape." The actions of the Coach were sufficient to get him fired.

That being said: the story was well written, even if not necessary erotic. Should have been in the "Fetish" category, as "f-----g the cheerleaders" is a standard male fetish