All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 14'

Loved it. More soon please. Keep up the great work.

I'm loving the story, so glad I checked whether any new chapters were out. Keep up the good work!

Didn't Nick turn Arielle into a vampire in the previous chapter (or Ch 12)? The exchange between Domino and Nick was also a bit confusing, but I worked it out. :) Things may have moved quickly between Hunter and Mirage, but it was fun. ;)

mira is going to ask for hunter to know who his parents are. loved it and cant wait for the next chapter. and the vampire thing did confuse me too. she was starting to change. shouldn't domino pick up on that.

Of course Mira will use the wish for someone else and my bet is on Hunter's familytree. PJ xx

Another brilliant story. But ive got 2 know, is Arielle a vamp or nt? And whats goin 2 happen 2 Nick and Arielle? Well please post more stories soon! I love all ur stories! Keep up the excelent work!

I liked the climax of sorts. I was relieved when Hunter found Mirage. I'm curious though, will she still be called Mirage? Trying to visualize the poison being purged from her body, it seems like that would be kind of gross.

Bia fessing up and admitting her wrongness didn't feel like enough comeuppance, but I guess Mirage in return staying immortal and being with Hunter and not turning into dust is prize enough. I hope Mirage can be happy with Hunter now and move on with her life. And make babies with tsundere attitudes.

i need more i L-O-V-E-D it cant wait for the rest

I love all your stories but I have a special fondness for your ASP characters. I agree w/previous posters who think that her wish will involve helping Hunter find out about his origins. I look forward to seeing how Mira resolves the conflict of her past. (Husband & child) and future (Hunter). I can't wait to see what you have in store for Domino. As you can probably tell I'll be checking religiously for updates...so please keep them coming.

about Hunter's family.

For the goddess of love, she's not paying much attention, it has to be for Hunter. Just has to be, I'm so glad you continued on with this series, I'm lovin' Domino.

OK- my guess is to tell hunter where he is from. I haven't seen any comments as it was on the add a comment tab when I lowered the page. I think that is what she'll ask for. I really liked this chapter. I am confused about one thing. Why didn't what Nick did change Ariel over?

Dark chocolate?! :-)

....hard and fast, right in the middle of conquering sex and then develop the character and his sex into intense sex just as good but different cuz he cares later on? probably after one or two more meaningless but intense sex? I promise to follow it if you give me just a taste of how bad....oops...how good it will get if we hang in there?

i know its for beast.

Yep!