All Comments on 'I Did It For Love'

I felt like there was a lot more to be explored in detail, and not just the sex. How did these two connect with each other? Ten years is a long time and a lot of history with each other to just skip over. And there had to be either something lacking or some sort of pressure in the U.S. that would cause him to jump the puddle so quickly. If she has nothing going for her over there, why wouldn't he alternatively offer to bring her over here?

It's a solid premise and you've got a good treatment started, but I would like to have seen a few more pages of it.