by artisticbiguy
Hey Man,
Loved this piece, really goodblend of romance & sex without compromising either.I've been on a bit of a romance buzz ltely since seeing Brokeback Mountain.
Well Done
Regards
Scott
brillant stuff. It was great to see the other side of the story. I enjoyed both stories very much. Thank you :)
I loved how you told the same story from Justin's side. It was just as good as the first story and I don't normally like gay male stories but this was great.
Oh, man, this is a sweet & sexy romance! I love it: two gentle hearts becoming ever more tantalizingly loving toward each other by fits and starts. I don't know, Brother Bi, whether to envy your life or your imagination. Keep it going!
I saw the hot, passionate picture that leochi painted on LJ for this story and had to read and I'm so glad that I did. It was such a sweet story with just the right amounts of angst to make the ending that much more of a happy sigh. I read both stories, actually. Very nice job in character development and in capturing the emotions of both men, especially when it was from Bryan's POV. His images of what he saw on Justin's face at varying times really brought him to life. Lovely!
Beautiful! Totally and completely wonderful. I read and loved both sides of their story, and yes found both of them to be perfect.
I have read all your stories articbiguy and truly loved every one of them.Very touching and real.Congratulations.Write more please.
NZReader
I read both stories, and they were just perfect for me. Guess I will go for more now.
Thanks for the softness to be found throughout them,
I just realized that I have now officially read all of your stories here on Literotica. The first one I read was The Yule Log. It was also my favorite..
You, my dear, artisticbigguy, are one of my favorite writers on here, and I wish you'd write more. I would so love to read more by you.
— Cyn
..... Great. Fantastic. Awesome. Amazing. Spectacular. Wonderful. Marvelous. Heart-wrenching. Staying-up-all-night worthy.
your stories are what i say are most sensual
I've read both stories. You take the reader on the rollercoaster along with these sweet boys. Please keep posting here.
You can't top this...no pun intended! (I only learned what that meant from reading you, anyway!)
If only the majority of relationships could evolve as did this lovely narrative.
I totally loved your story ! What fantastic characters Bryan and Justin are - it's great to read about their personalities and how we see each one with the eyes of the other; I wish I could've spared Justin some angst; before his epiphany, Bryan was a fun loving, beautiful ... moron.
If he had spared a moment keeping his head out of his ass, some pretty fierce suffering could have been avoided ! Justin said it:" it hurt too much to know that with everything that'd happened, he just never saw me the way I was". The description of what Bryan saw in Justin's face when he caught him with Tina, just about broke my heart, and I HATED Bryan then.
Thanx for the stories of Bryan and Justin. They're awesome ! And hateful !! ^^
Great story! I loved it & the characters too. Thank you & keep writing please!