All Comments on 'I Love You Too Princess Pt. 03'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Absolutely uninhibited love

Truly a family that knows what love is without pretending.

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
DON'T END IT!!!!

great story. love the sex, love the characters. love the story. we definitely need to have chapter 4 - and maybe even 5. you're a very good writer - you'll take it in a great direction i'm sure

eroticwriter01eroticwriter01over 6 years agoAuthor
Ideas???

Thanks for all the support! I am fresh out of ideas for story progression. Please comment ideas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Swinging

In this chapter, you wrote Abby had a hidden swinger side. Maybe expound on that?

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
a few ideas

you could have abby and sam have some time - just the 2 of them, later to be joined by Aiden. you could have Sam come home with a boyfriend or girlfriend a little later to join in the fun. maybe abby has a divorced hot sister with a son who can join in. There's a lot of ways to take it. but your writing style is terrific, i like you sex scenes - it would be great to build on this. good luck and thanks

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
FANTASTIC story .

You have many ways to go.

Had Sam really fucked all those guys or was she just getting Dad horny.

You mentioned she had a bday. Where was he when she was fucking Daddy every day. Do any of her BFs have big cocks?

Abby made a comment that she knew Sam was fucking her Daddy while she was gone. Will Sam & Aiden admit to FUCKING each other while Abby was gone.

Will Abby admit to a lesbian liaison or a male resignation while on her trip? Maybe she could invite the woman over for an interview racial trust. She wants to show friend her husband's big cock.

Does Sam have a teenager friend to share?

How about a fuck in the pool

prop69prop69over 6 years ago

A few errors due to autiful.

BF should have been in first paragraph.

Abby was in a foreign country. Interracial was supposed to be the other woman. Maybe even a guy with 12 inches. that would hurt Aiden, but different.

PapaGolf414PapaGolf414over 2 years ago

Just Incredible! It just keeps getting better and better, and now thank heavens for Adrian's always-resurgent virility!

I just can't imagine where you will take this story Next! and Thanx For The Read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So sucking fucking hot. Omg two red hot cunts to play with, the lucky fucker.

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