by eroslit
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope that there is at least a chapter II or more.
All I could do was envision you as Lisa so sweet young and sexy.
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Ron
Next time, write in 3rd person. All the POV changes destroyed what could have been far better.
Great story! Please, please, please a followup. Can see so many ways this could go.
Excellent. Very hot and erotic. I hope there will be more chapters coming forward.
5stars
I liked the sex in the story and gave it four stars. It would have been five stars if you had included descriptions of the characters so I had a better mind's eye picture of the action.
Welcome back, Traci. I love your stories and have always wondered how many are based on true experiences.
I am old man now but when ii was 15 years old I entered moms room and saw her jacking dad off and licking his head My dad saw me and waved me in I was watching when my mom noticed me and she opened up her legs and told me lick it …. Surprised I did as she ordered. .. Wow … the beginning of many many great time
Not a fan of family fucking. Too convenient, utterly unrealistic. Also everyone is empty of emotional investment. The story is just a vehicle for fucking. No romance here.