All Comments on 'I Never Knew'

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dietz100001dietz100001over 1 year ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope that there is at least a chapter II or more.

All I could do was envision you as Lisa so sweet young and sexy.

Your Fan

Ron

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Next time, write in 3rd person. All the POV changes destroyed what could have been far better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More Please!

KDH

DaddyWarBucksDaddyWarBucksover 1 year ago

Great story! Please, please, please a followup. Can see so many ways this could go.

Bronco56Bronco56over 1 year ago

Excellent. Very hot and erotic. I hope there will be more chapters coming forward.

5stars

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 1 year ago

I liked the sex in the story and gave it four stars. It would have been five stars if you had included descriptions of the characters so I had a better mind's eye picture of the action.

HandsomeVirile1HandsomeVirile1over 1 year ago

Welcome back, Traci. I love your stories and have always wondered how many are based on true experiences.

creativeandfuncreativeandfunover 1 year ago

I LOVED the story. I was hard the whole time I was reading it.

trousersnaketrousersnakeover 1 year ago

Wow, so good to have you back. Certainly haven't lost your touch

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I am old man now but when ii was 15 years old I entered moms room and saw her jacking dad off and licking his head My dad saw me and waved me in I was watching when my mom noticed me and she opened up her legs and told me lick it …. Surprised I did as she ordered. .. Wow … the beginning of many many great time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Not a fan of family fucking. Too convenient, utterly unrealistic. Also everyone is empty of emotional investment. The story is just a vehicle for fucking. No romance here.

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