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All Comments on 'I Still Cannot Believe It'

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themailman13themailman139 months ago

more ----- maybe????

HOG57headHOG57head9 months ago

Quite the twist

1mm0r3l1n31mm0r3l1n39 months ago

Good story. It could use some fleshing out and proofreading. At times there are words missing.

redlion75redlion759 months ago

Editing is a good thing

muskyboymuskyboy9 months ago

More like an outline than a story, no emotion or affection.

MorbidromanticMorbidromantic9 months ago

Then end? For me, certainly, as I'm not interested in a continuation. I certainly won't read it if there is one.

starbanestarbane9 months ago

Would love to see how this progresses

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I write stories for entertainment. I do my best to dot my 'i's and cross my 't's, but I gave my grammar guide before I retired, so cut me some slack. At 74 there isn't a lot that I use to cherish doing that I am now capable of doing owing to a bad back. So to all of you fru...