All Comments on 'I Wasn't Expecting This!'

Story had potential but you lost me at "40DDD."

Totally unrealistic, you should have said you had a 17 inch cock instead of your average, run of the mill 7 incher.

Keep it going!

great story love the fact of the son fucking his mom and then having her friend getting in on the act, you could have made it longer by having him fuck the friend as well but

there is always the follow up story in which this could happen

he could then fuck the friend in both holes as with his mom,

keep up the good work by writing the next story on this.

very nice.I like my mom NEEna. She is 42.SHE has ahuge ass.very sexy.her figure is 42-32-50. Yes her ass is so huge. SIMPLY TO TELL FRANKLY two months before I have analsex with her when my businessman DAD went for tour.. It was very nice fucking anal, vaginal , oral sex with my mom. IT is still continuing with my mom when my dad is away.

I've never commented on a story before, but i just gotta say, plz make sure someone proofreads ur stories. It was a good story without a doubt, but when i see lines like "The tightness of mom's cock," it kinda throws me off :P

THOUGHT YOUR STORY WAS GREAT ,,BUT I DO THINK YOU NEED TO CONT. AND HAVE THE FRIEND CUM BACK AND DO SOMEMORE FUCKING WITH HER AND MOM...MAYBE BRING ONE OF YOUR FRIENDS IN AS WELL

I liked this story, you definitley need to work on your grammar, but then again so do I. Don't worry about what some people say about the boobs. The 40 DDD thing was great! Keep writing man.

make more chapter 02 again thanks

Stud good story line. Like many have before me you need to work on grammar and spelling. Create your stories in a good word processing software, they all have spell/grammar check built into the software even aol instant message has spell check. Keep writing, there's a kinky twist to your work.

40DDD is quite realistic. I have had sex with a woman that was NATURALLY 44EEE/F that is EXACTLY how her bra read. Unfortunately she did require surgery that took them huge puppies down to 38DD. Because the rest of her body was so big they looked more like a b cup. I tried having sex with her after the reduction but could not get it up anymore.

get mom's sister involved too

thats good but he should have gotten his friends mom alittle more.

THE POOR OLD ENGLISH LANGUAGE...

He's wearing a "swimming suite"??? What - couches, tables & chairs? A nice dining setting perhaps? (Or should that be "dinning"??)

His mother's friend starting shedding her "cloths"???

For fuck's sake, people, make a bit of an effort!!!

that what this site is about sex stories,not english 101.

A 34D would be a lot better! A 40DDD could be a football player.

The gripes are nuts. My ex wife was 5'0", 125lbs, and had 44D tits. They were real, fun to play with and suck. And who in the hell cares about spelling in a fuck story. The idea is to tell a story, read a story, and enjoy doing so. I love to read them and jack off at the same time. I don't try to pick them apart. This was a good fuck story, with mother and her friend. Oh what the hell. I loved it. Going to jack off again.

Chuck

I think it's a must that you continue this story. Great job.

When my wife has her period she tells me stories of mums fucking their sons and daughters and dads fucking their daughters, I love these kind of stories and always get off on them so does my wife, I love Mum/Son stories and I am so rock hard wishing it was me and my mum and her sister fucking her ass, more please, more more more !!

Straight anal to mouth is a turn off.......sucking shit.........disease.........

If you learn to spell when you get to high school, try again!

very hot

How about Kathleen fucking his mom with a strapon whilst he rims mommys ass.

5 stars. could have had a longer tease, and more time with Kathleen, but i thought its was sexy.

Spelling and grammar an issue as is dipping out of the first person perspective

It was good. Needs a little editing but overall pretty hot and sexy story.

At least his mom let him fuck her if it was me would of cum in her cunt and her friends too