All Comments on 'I Win, You Lose'

by Many Feathers

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Arousing? Erotic?

I guess if you are sick enough it is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Very Hot!!!

Loved how the wrestling got hotter and hotter which lead to the bondage and lesbian stuff, keep writing this is good.. Good build-up and ending..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great story!

This was incredibly hot! Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I wished...

That I could vote this a 10 to negate the 0 from the first sad fuck who posted. At least you and most others know the quality of your writing. Keep on writing wonderful stories, make the trolls even more jealous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
HOTT

HOTT HOTT!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Don't think so.

The girlfriend would be HISTORY and the husband would be in the doghouse if not divorced in real life. Didn't believe this could/would happen

ticklechambersticklechambersabout 11 years ago
Feedback

Work on making your characters more believable. I liked your writing, keep on going! :)

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