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Trust David to always have his priorities in the right order...
End of Part 1
- COMMENTS
dirtyoldbimanabout 1 year agothis is the only chapter I have read, so far. Excellent writing of Lori's thoughts thru the years and her parents troubles. someone must have an anal fixation as it seems rather out of place for 2 young people finding a sexual love.
maxsteeleabout 4 years agoYou did mention that David's second father and Lori's father died, but you didn't explain what or how he died. I'm glad we finally got an explanation and also got to know what their mother went through before she died. It's sad, but it makes the story even better. Keep up the great writing.
SAV12over 5 years agoCHAPTER 6 HUMANIZES LORI INTO A LOVE SICK HUMAN FOR BROTHER. IF IT WAS WORKED INTO THE ORIGINAL STORY, THE FUCK FEST SLUT ROUTINE IS NOW UNDERSTANDABLE.
goducks1almost 6 years agoi waited till chapter 7 to be published to read Chapter 6. of course, 5 stars! what a wonderful sexy story told by a brilliant writer! loved it. I think you could keep Lori alive in a few more stories from the UK - carrying on from where you left the story in the epilogue. i love Lori - and this story!!!
