All Comments on 'Incident at the Gym'

you are sick in the head

Well written, a bit different, clever ending. Overall a good job.

Best to ignore those who give psychological opinions based on reading a fictional item. They give us 'anonymous' readers a bad name!

great story. i would love if there was a sequel so she could find out who he is.

VV

She should have broken his arm at the end anyway.

Firstly, this would have been a better fit for the nc/r category. Secondly, it shouldn't be too hard to track down the guy's identity.

I loved this! Wish I could have given it 5stars+++