All Comments on 'Inhibitions out the Window Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good Story

Hero is a bit of a idiot at times,meets a great woman and blows it,oh well. Well written,looking foward to the rest,Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
yes, principles

living by principles is good, but not everybody can see that like Katey. She wanted everything now, he wanted her later. Bad timing, but that is what life is all about, isn't it ? Time to move on indeed. G.Belgium

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
It cant end like this.

I gave you 100 but the ending just didnt work. You have something great here but need to continue.

WoodButcher57WoodButcher57over 15 years ago
So I guess

there is no chance of another chapter to this story, the ending just isn't an ending.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Obsession will hurt you

Every time - the only question is will it reward you enough ???

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