All Comments on 'Innocent Sin'

Add in to this.... give another chapter where she is the one who initiates the contact the next day.

Older guy takes advantage of a young woman. Takes her virginity. She doesn't even get an orgasm. He racks off. Wow, I've never heard of that happening before.

Really well written story, think you managed to narrate him being very gentle and soft with her particularly well. Chapter 2??? Maybe with the girl initiating this time as suggested before??? Keep it up.

The past tense of drag is dragged not drugged.

He wrote "drug", which is a past tense for "drag", but you already knew that or you wouldn't be here complaining about it.

Somewhere this switched gears from being a sexy story about two people interested in the possibilities of each other’s bodies - to an unsexy story about a guy imposing himself no matter what her reaction (Including cumming inside her regardless of the birth-control situation). No thanks...