by Ashson
It was a funny read, even good when he thought: "He was hidden behind the chimney, apparently attaching a new TV antenna. Here was a man who needed life insurance, and he needed it soon. Just don't let him kill himself until after he's signed for it and I've earned my commission...", but then almost all the jest vanished and all become hollow in the end...And I agree with @Twentyseven: Jim Beam and/or Johnnie Walker were missing in the story...2*
a fun read... I needed something that made me smile today thank you for a 4 star
But I guess this happens a lot, in your imagination. Maybe when you get older you can add some substance to your stories. Things like a plot, drama, suspense. Go look them up.
Yea they are imagination! They are MOST people imagination! Of course this would never really happen, but why do we want REALITY!
You idiots that bring down the story and the author are asshole trolls!
GO SOMEPLACE ELSE AND SPREAD YOUR SHIT!
Great story seems like it came straight from my imagination!
5*
Who's the troll? Maybe if you looked in the mirror you would see one.
No comment on story, didn't read it.
Of course you didn't read it, cause you are only here to spread your shit asshole!
What the heck is wrong with some of you commenters? Plot? Who cares. If none of you have never met a woman like that, I'm so sorry. They do exist. Maybe not EXACTLY like the story but there was this woman whose home I was installing a new roof on and it took twice as long to install the roof as it should have. Yes there was sex. No she wasn't ugly. And no I'm not hung like a bull. We had a good time and moved on. The end.
Go learn English you inane spic. This author is a douche bag loser. Also you river swimming wet back beaner, only queers like this rape minded sorry excuse for a Witter. 1 star for Asson
she just might be there when you return, TK U MLJ LV NV
Before you start heaping shit on everyone learn to spell, you are a dead set fucking wanker I'm surprised you have enough brains to post a comment on this site, if brains were dynamite you couldn't blow the wax out of your ears.
Anon got you a little upset did he? Must have written the truth to make you so angry. lol
Guys like you like to dish it out, but can't take it. Fucking hypocrite. You are the definition of a "troll". No doubt about it.
....but hot and well written? Oh, yes!