All Comments on 'Intervention Ch. 02'

THIS STORY WAS SO HOT I CAME IN NO TIME

this is one hot story ....

nice fantasy. Well done thanks. -- UK CYNIC

What a way to start a new year! They don't come any better than this. Love how you have organized it - can't wait for chapter 3!

The devil didn't make him do it, ALL THE WOMEN DID!

I want in on this household! Keep 'em cumming......er, coming! Lol

... loved this chapter. Can't wait to get to Chapter 3

Great writing.

I've been putting 5's on all these chapters, plus a bunch of other stories of yours that I've been recently reading so I figured I ought to say something and then when I got ready to say something, I came across a little error. It's actually the first one I remember. If there were others, they were so minor I didn't notice them, or the story was so hot I didn't notice them... ;-)

Anyhow, when something goes taut, like a body, it's spelled TAUT, not TAUGHT.. ;-)

taut

tôt/

adjective

adjective: taut; comparative adjective: tauter; superlative adjective: tautest

1.

stretched or pulled tight; not slack.

"the fabric stays taut without adhesive"

synonyms: tight, stretched, rigid More

<3

to have too much of a good thing?

if it is, he is rapidly approaching that level.

but it is still fun.

Good thing he doesn't have a job, or play computer games, or watch TV... He wouldn't have time, lol!

Nah, fuck lil sister first then throw mom down and fuck her silly ;)

I have always wanted a older brother to fuck

I am an older brother...and whew! My younger sister taught me a World of things about lustful hot sex.

You're writing an enjoyable erotic story. I like it when the characters are having fun and not hurting anyone. Sometimes stories need a villain but not always.

Whoa...damn. Damn hot.

The story is just so lustfully engrossing...me spreading 5 stars like Thomas spreading 'dos holes....

He's one lusty bastard...can't wait for 3rd part!!!!

You know what they say, "The family that lays together, plays together! " Get down boogie kids!

I’m enjoying your story. Well done.

This story is kicking lot’s of goals.

Really great story. Can't wait to see the next part!

Absolutely fucking wonderful. I have two live in fuck buddies we all acted out parts of this story and fucked each other till we all passed from sexual overload. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Covers a lot of erotic fantasies for both men and women. Just a little push in the right direction and the rest follows quite naturally.

5*

BJ

Loved it... again... I read this about 1 years ago. Thanks again for sharing!

I also liked this second chapter.

Absolutely red hot sucking and fucking, fabulous so much hot sex crazy cunt available.my two live in fuck buddies and I acted out parts of this story, but needed more cunt to join in so the girls invited their best friends to come and join our fucking sessions. I was eating cunt and fucking another while finger fucking a third before we all changed around, so fucking sucking hot, totally unbridled rampant sex, anything and everything available. Sex heaven. Cunt crazed sex maniac Lanc’s, UK.

Great story, five stars.

Oh this is fabulous, now for Ch 3

2 for 2. Excellent pacing and the buildup is perfect. Can't wait to dive into the next chapter. Another 5 stars from me.

The fun really begins....thanks.

No problem, just seduce your mom! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.