All Comments on 'It Started New Year's Eve'

A few grammatical stumbles, but a proper build and rationale' for the couplings. Good character development. I enjoyed it and gave you a five.

Ok, great start but you can't be serious about it being complete at this point - there is just so much more to be told - PLEASE!!

Good job!! Just don't leave it here. There is much more and many directions you could take this tale.

Please give us a sequel!!

Love how your philosophy about love and life come together in your stories. I always want to be one of your main characters - like Roger in this one. I hope you do a few sequels: what happens next, how the family expands, how they grow together, etc. Just write MORE! Thanks. A loyal fan. // Romantic1

This was, to me, not one of your best efforts. None of the characters evoked any emotion. This gave me the impression I was reading a story from DGH.

Aroused my body and soul - my eyes watered and my dick got hard! Now that's good writng. Thank you, write more, please.

You do have a quality storytelling style.

Liked this one, needs to be longer.

Also could you give us the recipes for this "jambalaya" and these "ribs". Australia only has meat burnt over flame, and pavlova. Actually pavlova's not that bad.

Everything that I would say has been said, good job.

this story is too good to end after one chapter, so do not intend to do let it die ... pleaaaaaaaaaase ;)

I only hope that the author will be kind enough to tell us more, as when they settle in their new home, and now they have plenty of room to raise a lot of children.

Since both women are prime child bearing age they could have a flock of kids and plenty of room to raise them. Roger can stay at home and take care of them after his two wives go back to work.

Thanks for the good story, it is very good and I love the happy ending to this post.

Loved the story. Would be even better if true. I think my daughter is the prettiest young woman alive and I would love to live this story.

It stands alone fairly well - it was quick and clean as far as it goes.

It felt a bit quick, a lot of territory covered in the story, but it still worked. Construction was good I did notice one awkward exchange where Roger spoke and I think it was Lynn for the question and Roger for the answer -

""You're crazy." Ruth said, "Anyone who looks at the two of you will see she's gone over you. I saw it when the two of you were cooking!"

"Is that so bad?" I asked. "We're moving pretty fast." I said."

Pretty minor bump assuming it is a bump not just awkward writing.

Thank you

I love the whole story. Everything fit together perfectly. I really enjoyed this story and would love to read more of your work. thank you

..."You aren't inviting a date for me, are you?" She had done it twice. It wasn't pretty.

@@@ Twice?! Holy crap! I think I'd have a coronary if I had a daughter and she pulled that even once! ...and a second time? I dont care if she is 25, her ass would be bare, aimed at the moon over my lap, bright red, hot, with my hand print repeatedly embedded on both cheeks! @@@

Ruth met my flight at the gate. She hustled me out to Lynn's car sitting at the curb. Half an hours drive later I saw the house. Two story western farm house with wrap-around porch, hundreds of trees and a long driveway. It even had two hitching rails beside the front steps. Lynn unlocked the house and took Ruth for a walk.

@@@ hundreds of trees and a long driveway? Its only a quarter acre, lol! Thats 10,890 square feet. If the house is dead center that leaves about 2,000 sq ft on each side of the house, assuming a 2,500 sq ft house, but its prolly bigger with 5 bathrooms (five?!) and a wrap around porch. @@@

She and Lynn bonded, told their stories and we got the house for twenty percent under the original asking price.

@@@ lol, what planet was THAT on?! Rofl! @@@

The realtor said, "You are the kindest man I've ever met. You treat your daughter's lover like you love her as much as you love your daughter. You even put them both on the title!"

@@@ rofl, love it, hehehe @@@

My wife died in January this year and I am dreading Christmas and New Year - particularly as Christmas day was her last day out of hospital.

While I have no one that is likely to be intimate with me - I can identify with many other things :-

- The same double bed

- Sleeping on the same side.

- The sense of loss and loneliness.

All the habits of years pervading. On top of that, all the love and care in this story is very touching.

a quarter acre of wooded lot. NOT a quarter lot.

being held is too..caring about who you are doing those things with is too

It's spelled blonde, not blond, when describing a female.

I've just finished reading a few of your stories n I don't understand how you get "great story" comments? U don't describe the characters very much or get in depth with sex scenes even though this is a site for erotic literature? The story makes very little sense from the 25yo college students(trying to be doctors), how the relationship develops, why would he need to be at the house being sold, that's a realtors job? A 1/4 acre with such a big house, long driveway, 100s of trees is impossible. They happen to meet all ppl that have lost someone close n the realtor gets them a discount? A story has to be somewhat believable n sex has to be written in a way that a reader can picture things in order to turn them on. Hope ur writing improves n u grow as an author as I do like to see ppl succeed in what they enjoy doing

Great! Just as all of your stories that I've read! THANKS !

ANOTHER ANOTHER STUPID DAUGHTER WITH TOXIC FRIENDS....

GREAT ! THANK YOU !

Not enough detail and story way too accelerated . . . . 3/5

good but a little simple and life changes went too fast