All Comments on 'It's Just Touch'

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AmazingRabbitAmazingRabbitover 15 years ago
Thank you

I am always fascinated by your ability to tell a story. When I see your name I always read your submissions. I really liked this done from a male view and the control over the physical picture. Even though the people in the story did get far into the sex act....I thought it dealt with the subject that you never hear about on a very real "oh my GOD what have I done" level.. No one really ever discusses what happens after these type things. I think as the world becomes more liberal so does our sexual liberation. AT least some. I on the other hand am learning the ideas beyond 2 people and having a tough time with it. But bringing it to life from a male perspective was great. My appreciation for your work doubled and I truly think you have the art to bring the emotion into a story where your readers feel what your writing. That is such a unique treat. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hmmm

Well written! I believe I would begin to question her motives, also. His reaction to her attitude leads me to believe that this is not what he would expect from her. Hence, suspicion. Hope there is more to this story as it just begs more...jdl

Peter_KacalanosPeter_Kacalanosover 15 years ago
Exhibition needn't include sex to be pleasurable

We enjoy exhibitionism as much as anyone else, and sometimes include intimate touching, but we never carry it to the extreme of penetration. We're also not as flagrantly obvious as the couple in this story, preferring to expose ourselves as if by accident. But everyone gets pleasure in his or her own way, so we don't judge people by how far they want to go. Magmaman has created a very wide variety of characters in his stories, illustrating the many was one can achieve sexual satisfaction. This well-written contribution is another typical example from this talented author.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Yep the sneaky little thing -

Trust is so fragile - and failure to be honest and upfront can bruise it - or - KILL it - his seems to be pretty badly injured - and for goo reason/

Carla never said NO period she said not really - and she did say it made her hot too when she did it - did what - the sexy clothes or????

Trust is just so goddamn fragile so are ego's

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ON A SLIPPY SLOPE

Carla says she just wants to show...but I bet she really wants to be fucked by other guys...a very dangerous game to play to say it is ok for hubby to go fuck about...means she will say it is ok for her to go fuck about which is what she was hinting at.....will only end in tears and a divorce.....been there done that....women are just fucking slut whores

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

He's absolutely correct. They just cracked open the lid on Pandora's box.

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