All Comments on 'It's Only Love Ch.02'

H,

As usual superior stuff.

Love it.

matt

Another fine tale from one who doesn't write enough.

A little far fetched though. I am also not sure that I would let my wife do these things. But hey it's your story.

A several year wait,but well worth it.Thanks for a terrific story!

As usual, your writing is tops! Would really love to see more of your work here as you are one of the best! Thanks for sharing...

Let's see, Burt Reynolds as Cashen? DB Sweeney as Hardison, Dennis Hopper as Uncle Mark? Female lead? The mind boggles.Kate Winslett when she is not starving herself as Susan? Isla Fisher (from Confessions of a Shopaholic) as Amber? Funny story. Thanks

Parts of this chapter reminded me of the harebrained schemes on the old "I Love Lucy" show.

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A new HDK tale!

I like his twisted sense of humor.

You should have left well enough alone and let the first part die a merciful death.

Sort of like Abbot and Costello. Thanks for the hard work

have to make Susan's hubbie such an idiot. At least one of them have some balls and that was Bill. Susan's ( I hate to call him that) husband was a looser from way back. He should have armed himself to go to the meeting. And just how the hell did the Texas pimp find out that Susan was whathisface's wife. You left lots on gaps there boy...Nyminus@yahoo.com

I did like it from someone who doesn't write many. Thanks.

I didn't even have to read the first chapter to get back into the story. Smooth addition and a good read. Welcome back home. Tail End Pete

I really liked the ending thanks for the story.....Rich

As always, enjoyed the plot twists and your slightly twisted humor even more than the sex. Thanks and don't wait so long for the next story.

It is tough for a sequel to be as good as the original. This is invariably true for movies, novels, and also short stories. I liked Ch. 01 a lot better than Ch. 02. For one, it was quite obvious that the blackmail scheme was intended to get our hero and his friend to sell their land -- they had nothing else of value based on what was revealed in the story, and nothing else in common, either. For another, why go through the motions of a blackmail scheme if the real plan was simply to force a signature on some documents? Why not go to both homes with some goons and put some weapons to their heads? The story was good but not as good as your usual, HDK. I thought the first chapter's plot was much tighter. I also feel that Sandy should have gotten hers. What was she willing to do in order that pictures would not be shown to her husband? She participated in a sleazy, nasty, entrapment scheme, actually many I would bet, and there were no consequences for her. Maybe I should write a sequel and reveal her just desserts . . .

As usual, another of your interesting tongue-in-cheek tales. How about finishing Norwegian Wood?

Boyd

and I didn't think it was very humorous, witty, believable, or enjoyable. part 2 simply proved me absolutely firm on my judgment. <p>

"Hun, if we go through with our scheme, you must understand I might pus the envelope, you know that, right?" and by that she meant sucking the other man in some motel room. of course, the hubby must be allowed to watch, to take some pictures. <p>

scene 1: <p>

"Honey, that was very brave of you! He could have become evil and held on to the back of your head and shove it all the way in and FAST, and you could have chocked, you know? Next time, you must tell the man ahead that if he did that, you are going to tell your husband, me, okay?" <p>

scene 2: <p>

after the evil man had tied hubby down, on a chair, and stripped him naked, he said: <p>

"Now, watch your slutty wife, whom you thought was the witty and faithful spouse." He turned his head; on the screen, she's stripped naked, too, and is bent over a desk, with the "dark" big HORSE man, oh, 280 pounds, with muscles bigger than Mr. Universe, said: "Slut, open up your legs, or I am not responsible if my big missile goes into the WRONG hole, 'cuz they're so close together, from where I am! o, god, and here I have a raging hard-on! what's wrong with me, when my beloved wife is in such a sticky situation!" <p>

from hubby's perspective, Mr. Hose must be, oh, 25 inches or so. "Oh, my god," he inhaled suddenly,,, "I wonder if Susan can take that monster! I hope the basturd didn't shove it all the way in at once; I hope he gives Susan time to adjust to it. God, this is a nightmare! After this, my beloved wife and I will never engage in these kinds of schemes again!" <p.

I mean, come on, really!,,, this is humorous, witty? LOL <p>

it's complete gibberish nonsense; neither funny nor witty nor meaningful...

you have been missed

And welcome back! Now, how about a followup chapter for; She's a Woman, Goofy and My Wife, A Real Suprise Party, Tit for Tat, and Yesterday?

But they have much better chance to succeed when flavored with a solid amount of top quality humor and a frequent wink from the narrator over the head of the characters: you and I know why I wrote here: 'my wife pretended to enjoy Bill’s playing with her breasts', obviously – an awkward moment is brilliantly handled by turning the husband into a temporary ironic commentator (of course she enjoyed it,,,) or into a temporary state of a psychotic dellusion, designed to protect his psyche from insane jealousy – you choose the one you prefer…(I like the former)... <P>

My point – Vulcan reservations would have been fully justified were it not for the humorous suggestion the story presents almost in every part of it. No, it’s not extreme enough to move it to the humor section as a parody; better yet, it walks the line –inserting enough humor into a romantic thriller to make it both romantic thrilling and fun! <P>

I always liked hybrids!

...and in fact there's no better writer on this site, except for ohio. HDK has the humor and the plot twists we've all come to love--and he's one hell of a manly man, too! Thanks to him for another funny, suspenseful adventure! We all look forward to the next one--ohio

I read the first chapter in Feb. 2005 so I had to go back and read it again to get up to speed.

Ha Ha any Further! Or is it farther like you wrote? Depends where you are from!

I definatetly would have had to let it "heal up" or would you try to re-claim it right away?

Thanks for writing!

Why don't you stop trying to write love stories You wouldn't and don't know what love IS!!!! Stupid..

Loved it. Funny, and the good guys won.

No one is interested in sex with old folks.

Many are interested in sex with old folks.

Bill gave it away for the reader at the end we just did not know who his back up would be - he was no ones fool.

As for old people I still have no clue where that comes from - and if you did not like chapter one about old people why read chapter two - it had the same people - methinks Dworn protesteth too much - I think he craves sex with 75 yr old women - or men

His wife is a giant slut and he doesn't seem to mind. She sucked off Baxter and would have done the same to Bill also how did she get into that room with Tony and why wasn't she trying to get away it seems as though she wanted to get fucked by his hugh dick and then you end the story with her saying that she did take a few inches.

Sorry that makes this a 1 star story you can and have done better than this rubbish.

Great read I loved the twist and turns. Thanks for sharing.

This story resonated with me in some ways. The scenario of placing you wife in a slippery (pun partially intended) situation is a turn-on to some of us, and the fact that we are left a bit hanging is a bit frustrating but a neat trick. It kept this story on my mind all day, and that is the mark of a good but of story telling.

You aslo have a knack for dialogue. Really enjoting your stories.

I'm not sure I like the very end.

Implying that she may have been penetrated with no indication of how much is awkward.

for his "loving" wife to service the bad guys, even if for supposedly altruistic reasons

It all became a game of progression when the boundaries were pushed. She was way too willing, and "farther" was the clincher.

imho hubby has given up his drilling rights.

Given the size of his equipment, and the lack of "damage" to Susan, he couldn't have gotten more than the tip in.

I think Susan has a taste for some kinky, strange or just exciting extramarital play time, even just subliminally

I won't think of her as a potential slut but VERY definitely...A 'Hot Wife'

How much Tony got it...enough that she remembers and thinks about it enough to tease her husband...just checking the water temp!

Thanks again!

2ndThoughts!

I was hoping he had plunged it into her cervix and was holding it there waiting for her cunt to adapt to his dick. Right before his dick was yanked out of her. Now her virginity completely gone after a loud pop as his dick dropped out of her.

Now she's had three different lovers during her married life.

Thanks for the effort. Keep your paying job.

First of all, he shouldn't have put Susan's name on the deed. Too much money involved and he wasn't looking carefully or listening carefully to Susan. She was mad about his shirt? THAT is what caused her anger? He should have listened to that lame excuse. And the big dick that got into her? She just became a big cock whore. Hubby just wasn't paying attention. Her attitude towards him should have given him cause for concern. But what I didn't like about this is that he was SO clueless. Both about their situation with the crooks and his situation with a wife that doesn't seem to have much love or respect for him. Nope. Should NEVER have put her name on the deed. More money for him in the divorce.......

And a fracking asshole

Susan is a fucking slut, this story disgusts me, for some reason the husband isn't even the slightest bit suspicious of just how good she is at 'playacting' a whore again and again.

Especially that last paragraph, she doesn't seem to have a care about having slutted it up with three different men not her husband in the span of a few days.

I admit that I was hoping Big Tony would have as much fun with Susan as he wanted. He deserved that at least!

cuck shit.

Pay no attention to the dick heads that denigrate your story. Nice job. Why do some of the dummies that read your stories not know that it's fucking fiction. It's just characters "created for the story." They don't exist. Stop reading loving wives if you expect something different ! Good story. Keep writing. 5 all the way !!!

U must read these stories just to jack off

Makes comment that it would be inconsiderate not to let wife try to accommodate Tony's big cock.

That sentence confused me. Up until then I had some respect for husband.

Ending of strory left me with belief that couple was headed down cuckold route

Actually ruined story for me

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I read this before.

This is quite different than a cuckold relationship. This isn't even about a swinging relationship. This is a Partnership of sorts. They had a goal and made the necessary moves to accomplish their goals (though perhaps Susan might have wished the cops were perhaps three more inches slower on the uptake...just saying)

It is a humor romp and at least HDK 'shared the wealth' with both spouses.

I'd divorce her first.

Once again you "cuckhounds" miss the point. This is fiction and is a farcical romp. If you don't get what this author is doing in his stories why keep reading them?

he deserves whatever diseases this prostitute brings to him .

The BTB / cuckhounds are at it again....ITS FICTION you idiots

This started out as a pretty good story, then deteriorated into a bad cartoon. D

Where is the rape charge? He fucked her by the letter of the law. You just showed that these cops were more interested in extortion than rape. So wrong!!!

HDK, You have really added Drama and Hot Erotic Sex to this chapter and the twist was excellent. Susan needs to let her husband see close up what her pussy looks like after Tony. Thank you!

You tried, but this story was more stupid than funny. Better luck next time.

After the first chapter this is a let down.

Spectacularly unlikely but fun.

I have enjoyed many HDK's stories and hated many of HDK's comments other writers. This is one time I would like to say you need an editor. I know, I know you have some of the best I guess sometimes they just can't read.

In chapter one you let us know, 'I do okay. I'm good at my job, have two great kids in college and a wife that is incredible' and 'I felt a lump in my throat as I gazed at my wife of 22 years'. Using my super ginormous brain cell's I would put Mitch's and Susan's age at 44. So goes the lead in.

'The other interesting piece of information was that he wanted Baxter to get the same goods on Bill Vance. Bill had grown up on the farm next to my parents' property. He was a few years younger than I. We had played baseball and basketball more than a few times as kids, as well as hunted deer together quite often in later year'. If Bill and Amber are a few years younger (two by my guess) and Amber is pregnant They will be 60 when the kid moves out.

Then there came the errors, 'Ha!" laughed Susan without mirth. "We already figured out it was that prick Joe Longo. You can tell your "client" that we're going to ruin his life as soon as we get done sending yours down the shitter' and two paragraphs latter 'Sam Longo? I've never even heard that name before. The man that hired me was from out of the area. I doubt you know him, or have ever met him," responded a worried Baxter. "I'll give you his name and his cell phone number in exchange for all the incriminating evidence you have against me'. Rookie mistake.

Yes I know you wrote this in 2009 and the first in 2005 but you had a lot before and plenty in between so these things should have been captured. All of this from a humble follower.

Just a good story with a nice little twist. Maybe not your best, but good enough for me.

gambled the lives of their wives..........no way folks...

More crap.

A lot of HDKs stories were good. This one is just garbage

I liked this one too. Especially the last line -" Did you just say '"further"?"

But i think this an open marrige

Makes no sense at all

Half assed humor, unlikely dialogue and stupid plot. Is this really written by HDK??! Totally unworthy of him if it IS his. 2*s.

Great story with a great ending! 5+*

Worthless. If two people want an open marriage then divorce and fuck around while cohabitating. When one is fed up, the other can leave without too much hassle and all the financial nonsense.

......I dont know what to think....

A very silly story with a very cute ending. Don't take it serious, folks, it's all for fun.

Fun story, but the last lines kinda killed it for me

Agree, the last line was hurtful. Besides that, it is a good story. Give it a 4 because of the ending

Grest Story, Great plot, Great Character Development. Everything perfect! I really liked the last line "further" LOL! I used to have a biler buddie with a giant cock most women really wouldn't want to take. If they did then that is all they wanted after that!! I love a happy ending 5 stars!!

I swear these morons on here that just complain and complain and complain. What are they 14 yrs old and live mommies basement? These are FREE stories we write dumbasses. If you think you can write better give it a shot! Meanwhile shut the fuck up assholes! Gezz what a bunch of whiners. These aren't real, they are just stories. FICTION have some fucking manners. It takes a lot of work to write a story to not be appreciated.

I agree with Buster2U, from 7 days ago. The idea of complaining and getting pissed at FREE stories is asinine, but to be honest, I have been guilty to a degree, also. My comments are, I hope, of a, at least, semi-constructive nature. I have looked at a few of my comments, and wished I were able to edit it, but once the enter key is hit, I am only able to rue some comments. I do appreciate the efforts and the results of most writers. Thanks editors, thanks a LOT.

I really enjoyed this story, right up until the last two paragraphs, that was totally unnecessary. I resisted the temptation to give you one star for ruining a really good story.

Too many cuck moments to make it palatable.

If this story were any more convoluted it would be in a foreign language. Not even a little believable. Booo !

The first part was pretty good. The second part got real convoluted. The last few sentences lost a star.

Very well written. Excellent story. I think Susan was loving every minute carrying out their revenge. Quite a turn on.

Well written, but too many "this doesn't make sense moments". Why are the "devoted" married couples willing to participate in sexual acts w/ non-spouses, when simulating sex for photos is just as easy? Why did the law enforcement that knew the whole operation, rush in and handcuff the innocent people, including the nude wife? Big, big holes. Didn't totally ruin the story for me, but really dropped it down in rating, especially the last part as being unnecessary.

Ending was uncomfortable.

Was good. Except when I had to go back to see where "Sue" came into the picture?

Just didn't work for me. Can't see a happily married couple being prepared to do what they did re the sexual acts to set up the PI and if said sting was in place the FBI would have come in earlier to stop the wife from being assaulted and raped especially as she didn't know it was a set up. This is just a load of silly fantasy with no basis on reality. When you write a good story it really works but when you do a not do good one it bombs and for me this did big time. BardnotBard

If I was Mitch,I would be keeping an eye on Susan.Judging by her behaviour with Baxter,Bill and Tony,she has a liking for strange cocks.