Jack And Dianne

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The three discussed the plans for the next three days and finally they agreed to build the dwelling. That summer they all worked twelve to fourteen hours a day keeping up with the farm and with the construction. By cold weather they had the new house completed enough they could move in. It took them another three years to finish all the rooms and be able to say the dwelling was finally finished.

During the three years they worked on their new home each of the ladies presented Jack with a child. The young family was content, secure in their love for each other. What was even more surprising, perhaps, was the acceptance of the community. Most of the persons in the community thought of Janice and Betsy as Mrs. Morgan. Somehow the agreement Jack, Janice and Betsy had drawn up by an attorney had become known in the community. This agreement gave all of them the same rights and privileges of a spouse for the others. Since they had worded the document as a legal contract they did not run afoul of marriage laws.

The three settled in and became prominent citizens of the Steelville area. As years passed they expanded their operation and became quite a large supplier of fresh produce to the local residents. They even obtained contracts from Wal-Mart to supply pumpkins and straw in the fall for sale in their stores.

In his later years Jack came to look on his short association with Dianne as fortuitous rather than the disaster he thought of it as when he was living through it.

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NitpicNitpic11 months ago
What

What happened to his job at the grain store?

.It vanished along with his commodities trading work.

ewray321ewray32111 months ago

It went from good for three and a half pages to just stupid.

RanDog025RanDog025almost 3 years ago

DAMN I LOVE YOUR STORIES! 25 STARS!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I stopped after page one. What financial investor signs a document about distribution of assets without reading it carefully or having a lawyer see it? In the story I got the impression that the pre-nup was handed to him just minutes before he got married. Thats not even believable anyone would sign a pre-nup under those conditions. ... The detailed descriptions of his lust and disgrace in mixed company was impossible for me to imagine since he would have been half yelling "She was the hottest woman I've ever seen!" over the pounding and jackhammering of a gas generator. Couldnt he have had his electricity on and still get a visit? All this and more from just page one. Very, very poor. PS. Before submitting this I read some comments. Sooooo glad I stopped reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I loved it until it became an adolescent jerk off fantasy involving incest and sister wife nonsense. How about tagging poly so people who like that read it and everyone else can avoid it? Lazy. -starsong

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