All Comments on 'Jack Didn't Like Her'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great Story

Always wanted something like that to happen to me....yeah

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Lazy, very lazy...

Lazily written, sloppily edited, unconvincing and just piss-poor. Must try harder, no stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I may not be a literary work of art but.

I love it.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchalmost 11 years ago
?

This isn't incest, they aren't blood relatives. It doesn't even really qualify as taboo. It's barely a sex story. I'm sorry, but this is a misfire.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Ummm,

Do you speak English? At all?

chytownchytownalmost 11 years ago
Thanks ***

For the read.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
A very fast paced story that was a joy to read.

A good storyline that kept me interested through out the story.

I thought the ending was very good.

Thanks for the read...

tnadnudertnadnuderalmost 9 years ago
I Didn't Like It

As I began, a million mistakes. Thought maybe one would suggest to the other they go to another country &/or find her mother, & Eva marry Senior, but no.... Should have quit before Page 2 for sure!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved the out come .Wow what a road trip .

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