by qualitywheat
Lazily written, sloppily edited, unconvincing and just piss-poor. Must try harder, no stars.
This isn't incest, they aren't blood relatives. It doesn't even really qualify as taboo. It's barely a sex story. I'm sorry, but this is a misfire.
A good storyline that kept me interested through out the story.
I thought the ending was very good.
Thanks for the read...
As I began, a million mistakes. Thought maybe one would suggest to the other they go to another country &/or find her mother, & Eva marry Senior, but no.... Should have quit before Page 2 for sure!