All Comments on 'Jake's Sisters Ch. 02'

very goood .I like incest storys and I liked this one ,wheres the next part?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

fantastic job my friend. I was waiting for the second chapter and now I'm hooked. Can't wait to see if mom ends up in here too

This storyline is incredible, but don't feel pressured to write only incest stories because they are more popular. Write what you want to write because you enjoy writing the material. I, for one, enjoy your series "The Show"

Anyway, this is well written, except for a couple of places your spell checker hosed you.

Fantastic work, musicankane, fast becoming one of my personal favourites here on Lit. Keep up the good work! :)

Excellent story & well written... looking forward to the next installment

Keep it up looking forward to the next chapter

You got a great story going. Keep those chapters and sisters coming, or is that cumming?

the first one was good, this was better! i have enjoyed it sooo much. cant wait for 3, to see what else you have in that mind of yours.

like someone else said, don't feel pressured to write only incest. even if it is amazing!! i will read anything you write, just to see if you amaze me more!

again... cant wait for part 3... so you better get writing!

What can i say? Oh yeah i know. Brilliant. superb. Fantastic.More more more!!!

Please keep the episodes comming as i can't wait to see which of the girls manages to get him next.

The writing is damd good, although there are one or two spelling mistakes that could have been sorted out before posting (but then again I have no room to talk)

Over all an excellent second chapter in what i am certain will be a series that i keep cumming to, and coming back to, again and again.

Keep up the good work but don't fall prey to the bane of many writers who keep on with a story even when it has become stale(although i dont think you need to worry about that for a while yet lol)

Another great story, but it had some minor flaws that could have easily been caught with the use of a editor or just someone to read it over before its published. Keep up the good work though

i hope thats not the end of it lets hear more fuck them all mom too

You've got a great story going. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry, write more

Wonderous tale! Looking forward to your next chapter. Jake is in Heaven and we all wish we had his sisters and were making love them. Sibling Incest are the most popular stories and you write masterfully on the subject

This is the best series I've read in a very long time, keep them coming quickly.

Jessica stripped in his room, having him drool over her big, firm breasts and reach for them only to be interupted by the call to dinner.

Later, she is interupted yet again before she can taste him, while kneeling before his big dick on the floor of the bathroom.

Who knows how jealous she'll be after learning Sarah dragged him into a private booth in the back of a strip club and rode him buried in her tight young pussy until she was literally flooded with a huge load of his sperm?

Good God - which sister will get filled next?

Get writing, man. Don't even stop to read these posts. This is hands down the best series currently running here. Get going. I mean it - quit your job, dude. Stay home and get back to the computer. We're waiting.

Excellent Job! This story is way hot! It's premise is godd and I can't wait for the next part! I do believe Jessica will be pissed that she wasn't first! She will have to show her sister up!

A real hot story! Keep it rolling!

Lukas

A great sequel. The build-up from the first was great, but the release in this one fit perfectly. Ah, a series that I will be watching closely!

This is one of the best series that I have read yet. Great build up, and release...I mean that literally. Keep em' coming. Great job.

and you're going to need five big ones to take care of the four gorgeous sisters and that red hot mama!

You certainly know how to build a story and bring things to a boil slowly and with feeling. This is one fine hot story.

very hot, cant wait for the rest

I have not been that involved in a story in a long time. It flowed very easily. You gave your readers exactly what they wanted. It was not only very sensual. It was laugh out loud funny at times. The best part,in my opinion, was before Sarah and Jake had sex. It came to him why his sisters wanted him. I have not laughed that hard in a long time. I am so proud of you. You are writing a great story with some of the most interesting characters. I almost wish I knew Jake and his sisters. Keep up the good work.

Great story. Watch spelling ie..hid instead of his, etc.

Loved it. I ain't even into incest but oh my god, that was good. I couldn't even get through the whole damn thing. Only half way, to the part with the strip club. I can't wait to finish the rest of the story.

Haha awesome.

But the numerous typo's and grammatical errors sort of take some of the fun away.

I'm also not too fond of stripper scenarios for some reason but Sarah is a great character... though I preferred her as the angry bitchy type. Ya know, angry sex?

LOL. That might be asking for too much though.

Very well paced and very hot! You do a great job building tension.

Oh to be Jake right now!

spelling errors, Use a fucking editor or at least spell check ya dumbass!

as soon as sarah said that she was acting that way because she saw his dick a normal guy would stand up and tell her to go to hell and leave keep it atleast sounding realistic no virgin is going to act that way

I just wanted to reassure you that you've got at least one person reading this who doesn't much care why a chick wants dick. So long as she does. A teenage guy should be ecstatic just to hear a hottie talking about cock, let alone theirs, especially if they're (aforementioned dude) a legal aged virgin.

You're a great writer.......but a terrible typist.

is this story real? or fictional?

Your story ideas and presentation are exceptional, however you should probably get someone to look over your writings and fix your typing errors. Other than that, great story.

you notice how they try to correct you but they left an anonymous post....stupid pricks...great story

"reaching depts. in her never before touched". Departments? Some of your misspellings are funny! Reread and correct before submitting, please. It would make your fine stories even better.

if mom looks like Rachel Weisz, you BETTER bring her into the mix! FUCK YES!

Glad I remembered to bookmark this last night when I started the first chapter!

I'd love to have (cute) sisters, even if the reality never lived up to the fantasy, hehe. Damn mom just kept marrying jerks with no kids or I wound up with brothers, grrr... You would think after FIVE husbands (gee, think she has long term issues not finding assholes?! Lol) I would wind up with a sister or three!

...I gotta do a general bitch though. Not really ragging on the story, just the way these virgins seem to get written into stories in general... So, what the fuck is up with all these virgins bliwing their load in like 30 seconds?! Even really worked up it seems crazy, I mean damn! Some other guys post their thoughts on this? I know when I lost my virginity we fucked for at LEAST 20 or 30 minutes, no foreplay either, she was soaked and had me save that fir another time. (Hell I was pretty nieve anyway back then anyway). How long did some of you other guys last? I mean I know Im not 'normal' in that reguard, I'm typically a 45 minute guy and have always seemed to have to work hard to cum (not always a blessing), but still...

That Sarah who basically hated her brother Jake would be the one to literally fall in love with him,also the one to get his cherry.I guess its true what they say about how there's a fine line between love and hate.

Sarah and Jake seemed to reach a turning point and now instead of trying to kill each other with insults and name calling,they will try to kill each other with love and sex.I am so glad Jake and Sarah reconciled.Now about Jessica,Sandy,Lindsey,and maybe Mom giving Jake a Birthday to remember would be super.

"Jake''s Sisters Ch. 02:" - In Chapter 01, mother is named "JANE?" In Chapter 02, mother is named JANET?" Which is it??

On Jake's eighteenth (18th) birthday, his twenty (20) year old (twin) sister, Sarah takes Jake to a twenty-four (24) hour, full service titty/strip--and optional expensive fuck--bar. Sarah (one twin of his four [4] sisters), "gets the prize!," she takes his virginity!! After her one (1) surprise--her stripped naked dance, displaying her goodies young pussy wantonly in her brother's face! She redresses and takes him to a private back room. Not only has she taken her (only) brother Jake's virginity by her giving him his first FULL-body exposure of a naked female, but she gives his monster fuck-pole his first blow job, she gives him his first deep bareback, pill-protected pussy fuck, packing her barely used young pussy full with his virile cum! His (twin) sister--he and her have hardly ever gotten along with each other--gives him the first fuck of his life.

As a footnote, the full procedure, from her stripping immediately in front of him, to his deep, pussy filled virgin fuck, was so profoundly detailed that it took most of an hour before my stone-hard dick withered. If Jake has this kind of luck and experience with his remaining three (3) sisters--and I'm praying--with his mother, my dick won't be soft for days. And, if he impregnates Lindsey and/or his mother, Jane/Janet I might be tempted to fuck a few of my neighbors.

The story does have some imperfections of word usage, though the words are spelled correctly but with different meanings, i.e., "feel" used instead of "fill;" these over sights are abundant. That's not any complaint, but constructive observations. Keep writing.....PLEASE....but get an editor that has an eye for these detail corrections. Excellent theme, story details, characters and their roles and salacious actions, and promises of more fabulous romance with all his sisters, and the subdued, fertile mother of Jake and his sibling sisters!!