Jake's Sisters Ch. 05.2

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Sandy gasped and shifted on her feet as if she were about to lose her footing. Jake took her earlobe into his mouth and sucked softly before he whispered to her.

"I'm close, what should I do about it?" He asked her in a voice barely loud enough to hear.

Sandy felt a pain of disappointment. She didn't want to stop yet, she had not gotten to cum, but she figured she could fuck him again. She told herself that she'd only fuck Jake once, but now that she'd had him inside her, she knew she wouldn't be able to stop at one time.

"On my tits." She breathed. "Shoot your load all over my chest so I can rub your cream into my skin."

Jake kissed her neck and reached between their legs. Sandy gasped as he refitted his cock back inside her. He kissed her neck and made very short, yet quick strokes into her body. For a moment she panicked thinking he was going to cum inside her pussy.

But Jake pulled away from her with another groan and Sandy dropped to her knees before him like it was a planned dance routine. She reached fro his cock and began jerking him rapidly. Jake groaned and watched his sister eagerly await his globs of semen.

She didn't have to wait long, with a grunt Jake's rod shot a huge glob at Sandy. Her aim was bad and the power of his orgasm surprised her. His first huge rope of nut splash her face covering most of her left cheek. Deciding to take a different route, Sandy opened her mouth as more cum erupted from her brother. His thick cream covered her tongue and began to drip from it onto her chin and chest. He came and came, by the time he finally stopped her mouth and chest was covered.

Jake slumped against the wall and Sandy swallowed the cum on her tongue and around her lips. She couldn't believe just how much he shot. If he had cum inside her she probably would have been impregnated for sure. And somehow that thought mean a small orgasm run down her leg.

"Wow, I need a shower." Sandy said. "You shot enough baby juice that we would have been in trouble if you got some inside me." She laughed.

Jake chuckled nervously. "Don't tell me that. I almost wasn't even going to ask, I was close to just shooting inside you and watching it drip out." He said, remembering how much he loved coming inside his other sisters.

"Well, I'll go get some birth control and then you can fill me anytime you want." Sandy said. "But I need a damn shower right now before this stuff dries on my face."

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bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123over 2 years ago

"Jake's Sisters Ch. 05.2:" - This version .2 of chapter 05 sure cleared up lost of ambiguities of chapter 04 going into chapter 05.1. This resumed direction of the stories intentions is a great move with Jake now having had sexual activities with his four (4) sibling sisters. He should made some subtle moves on his mother, maybe even getting her pregnant; if not impregnating his mother, he should at least fall in love with his most favorite sister Lindsey and setup their familial lives (and children) together.

This version of chapter 05, chapter 05.2, seems to have gone back into the writer's intentions of the stories theme. It is much better now, with some emotions from Jake that he never displayed before with any of his previous three (3) sisters "encounters. " Keep writing, incest in particular, in this manner, with more emotion of each character, and the story, along with the reader's comments, will show positive results.

Incest characters, participants and real life persons, are VERY secretive about the lives and life-styles, even among other family members. Criminal prosecutions is inevitable in real life. Therefore, in order to include the realities of incest life styles, secrecy is a must.

In the event the writer, 'musicankane' emulates the first three (3) chapters and chapter 05.2 of this stories theme the writer will find most appreciative reader's comments. I can assure my comments will be positive and constructive when the norms of real life incest are used as your muse. Jake and his five (5) females--mother and sisters--at home all deserve the respect and love of each other!!

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 4 years ago
5.2

I agree 5.1 was a mistake. It was definitely a hot read, but the wrong direction for this tale. 5.2 is more the direction I expected this to go. I feel sorry for Jake a little. He wants sex what 18 year old male doesn't. But he seems to be looking for more, and so far, all he's getting is used. I hope he finds a balance between the two. It would be kinda Hott if the Mom, Janet is just as "addictible" to Jake's charms as his sister's before he finds said balance. She doesn't have to be involved but it would be cool to be able to be open within the house.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Good Comeback

Thank you for fixing the last chapter with this one, it is much more satisfying to read.

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sover 5 years ago
Thank you for redoing ch5

I see why you wrote this chapter and it is much better than that crap pool party chapter. Thank you. Keep writing.

AncientKarmaAncientKarmaover 7 years ago
Good

I personally liked this version alot better, but both were pretty good. Keep up the good work!

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