All Comments on 'Jed's Risk Really Pays Off Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Who's Who...

I think it is a good concept, but you really need to go through your story again and make sure you don't mess up names... Alice is the chef, but her name changes to April randomly halfway through

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
huh?

you go from alice to april back to alice?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
hot dark and erotic

totally loved it - so hot!

spankfunforspankfunforover 8 years ago
Wild Feelings

Heather Has a Guide to Let Her be Content! Jed Will Lead Her! Great Tale! More to Come?

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