by zoolicious
I enjoyed your story and how Donna led
the way for her cousin to finally loose his virginity.
Thanks for the story.
I really enjoyed this story and plan to read more of your work.
well written. sexual and hot but scarcely pornographic. Just nice sexual love.
Nice story, even progression of the rhyme. Until the finale; weak, too brief, and disappointing.
My apologies for the poor editing on my part. I hit that contest deadline hard. I hope you enjoyed it, anyway.
Zoo
Loved your story, kind of got close to home for me. He should have invited her back every year for Natl. Nekked Day. I loved my kissing cousin, but alas we grew up, married others, and lived far from each other. Probably a good thing.
That was really good. Nice setting, good characters and a hot, fun storyline. I hope there's another episode or two with either or both characters.
Nice story, well developed but it sort of collapsed at the end Got the impression you finised it in a rush to meet the deadline - same reason as I didn' t get an entry in.