All Comments on 'Jenny Ch. 01'

So much happened in this first chapter that it is hard to imagine it continuing. Beautifully done. We have to learn a bit more about the people in the beautiful bodies..

First night, great sex. I think your going to add plenty of drama to this one

the sex. Then the drama.

Like the tie-in to Ingrid and Steve.

Normally your stories have some sort of plot. So far, this is sex, sex and more sex. And the man (Tom) has a penis thicker than his thigh. This is the only part I am going to read. Advice can be taken or ignored and here's mine to you; stick with what you know. Really disappointed.

Another incomplete story on Lit.