All Comments on 'Jeong Park's First Frosh Ball Ch. 04'

again waiting for the next instalment, absolutely awesome

Keep it going you have great imagination and great detail in your story's

Have you given any thought to the striking similarities between your Erik and silkstockingslover's Bree? (Long series Lesbian MILF Seductress). Similar in that they walk in and women/girls eagerly do whatever they say. (Opposite in that Bree is a lesbian). Sick, twisted and hot.

Actually, no, I've never read those. Totally coincidence, but we likely have that same sort of generic stereotypical charmer in mind. I'll have to take a look now, but when I came up with Erik, it was as one of those guy's you meet every now and then that just as this talent to coax the panties of any girl he meets and have his way with them. In Erik's case I kind of took that a bit further, in that Erik likes to share them round .... and he's got a talent for getting his partners so excited they won;t sat no to anything....

You have a random apostrophe that keeps making its presence felt in inappropriate places. It's (See what I did there? It's a different it's to the its I used before.) not appropriate for them to come randomly trundling in for plurals.

(eg: in your last comment you had Eric as one of those guy's.)

Apostrophe s ('s) is mostly reserved for possessives. When a guy owns something, it is the guy's. If a lot of guys jointly own something, it is the guys'.

I do hope that's helpful. (There's another one. That's a contraction apostrophe.)

Oh the joy of pedantry. We grammar Nazis can't let these wandering apostrophes go loose like that.

Lue

Eric seems to have a lot of stamina hes at it all the time. Can't wait to see what happens at the party.

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee where is hayleyyyyyyyyyy<3

I'm sorry, Hayley has been a while hasn't she. I think I'm writing too many stories at the same time and everyone wants the next installment of the one they like most. Okay, I'm working on Strawberry 4 right now along with the Barbie Kiu 2. Next is Isabelle (Happy Birthday to Me), then Chinese Takeout 6, then I'll do another Hayley vhapter.

Great series! Keep up the good work!

I really hope you have it in your plans for someone to kill that piece of shit Erik. Or at least seriously fuck him up... Perhaps Wilfred is some kind of martial arts expert. BTW, you referred to him as "Wilson" several times. Might want to watch out for that.

Erik? Oh, worse than that. What goes around, comes around, and Jeong finds her mean streak in the end...

Wilson/Wilfred? Thanks, I missed that completely!

Is this still going to be continued?

Yes, it is. I've almost finished the next chapter. Another couple of weeks of of and on writing in between the other stuff and it should be done. Check back again around the end of April.

Whens the sequel?

I'm really curious and excited to know what's going to happen.

please continue the story!

It's a good story will it continue?

I'm almost done the next chapter

Please continue, I would like to read about Jeong getting it from the big E

Don't leave me hanging 😩

Really have enjoyed your stories 😁

Love your stories. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Hope life gives you the time (and inspiration!) necessary to continue!

Indeed, Cleese, we have a problem with our dear sweet Chloe spreading herself thinly. (I won't say 'too thinly' as she has every right to write what she wishes.)

She takes on new projects which attract her interest as an author which leaves readers of her other works wanting her to return to their favourites. I want more Strawberry, others want Jeong Park, others even want Happy Birthday to Me. And then there's the story that looked as though it would be her masterpiece Chinese Takeout.

On a free site authors owe the readers nothing. Authors write for their own entertainment and if the readers like their stories and say so, that's a bonus. But we readers can live in hope.

Lue

The next chapter of Jeong Park is almost done. And the next chapter of Chinese Takeout is being worked on. They have not been forgotten, neither has Isabelle, Strawberry or Hayley. I'll get one of them out soon.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter in this series. Most impressive. :)

This is one of the best stories you wrote, really looking forward for the next chapters.

I hope they are released soon :-)

Been waiting forever for new frost ball series, please share

Love this series hope you add more to it. Want to know what happens with jeong

I’m in love with this series and want to read more. Please update soon

As soon as I'm thru my current writing commitments I'll work on the next chapters of Jeong Park, Chinese Takeout and Happy Birthday. I've had to many requests for these and I can't ignore them any longer.

Omg can’t wait to read what happens next, been waiting so long for this to be updated. Can’t come soon enough, love this series. Happy writing

Mmmm want to find out what happens with the dad and Jeong. Need more

I really want to find out what happens since I can relate to parts of this series. Waiting patiently :)

Three year wait is a bit long ?

Hope everything is ok, hope you finish the next chapters for this waiting anxiously lol

Hope this gets another 5-6 chapters, want little Jeong to get used by the dad and by everyone else later, maybe add some non consent in the next chapters.

I’d really like to read more of this hotness.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this series and I hope that there is a lot more on the way. It seems like lots of people are anxiously waiting for updates. Please don't forget this one

Since Chloe clearly doesn't care about finishing her stories for her public that has been waiting for so long, I am writing the next/final chapter on my own and I let all you guys know once it's ready.

Ohhhh I do. I just get so caught up in other stories but I am a good way thru the next chapter. I’ll whack it out, I promise, but if you’d really like to have a try, contact me. I’d have some suggestions and I’d be happy to see someone else’s take on it.

I really enjoyed reading this story, I almost feel like I could relate in some ways. Anyways, I would love to see Chloe add more to this series herself. There's just something about having the original author continuing their work. I would love to see others take on the series but maybe have them start from beginning. Hope to see more :)

any chance there will be a continuation chapter by end of 2020?

Please don't forget about this story (>.<) would like to read more, even more so with stay at home order :p Hope your well and staying safe.

plz plz plz plz

plzplzplzplz

I was working on it this morning... not to long

That is great news! I can’t wait and thanks for taking the time I am sure you are very busy.

Exciting to hear that your back working on this. Been waiting solong forthe next few chapters on this series, im sure a lot of your fans are. Hope to be reading it soon

Can't wait for chapter 5 and beyond. Erik and Sally never fail to get me off and now I really want Erik to take Jeong's virginity too.

Please hurry and give us more of this awesome story. Your sex scenes are bloody fantastic!

I’m not sure how/why Wilfred becomes Wilson but is happens a few times during this chapter. I’ve been a fan of yours for several years. Living on the Gold Coast I recognised the reality of your Aussie adventure and believed your stories to be originals. However, when names become transposed it raises the possibility of the error occurring during translation to English or worse……

Still love your work and consider your stories amongst the best available on Literotica.

No, Wilfred and Wilson was just a hiccup in my head. I kept getting the names confused and I missed it a few times when I was editing. Easy to do when you're editing your own story. You see what you want to see. I still get that one mixed up. You'll probably spot it in one or two of the other chapters too. As for translation? LOL. I don't speak anything else well enough to even read it, let alone translate.