All Comments on 'Jerk Ch. 02'

I think this has a lot of potential to keep going. I would love to keep reading this series.

So very erotic. You earned the five stars you have received so far.Thank you.

Small suggestion: Valerie could help him by introducing him to a girl his age and either coaching or joining in.

Thanks for the compliments! As I always say, there's a chance this one could continue. It's a matter of whether the characters have another story to tell me that I think has enough meat on the bones to post.

At least now, with this story getting a sequel, you know that's not all hot air LOL

Great story, love it if you coul carry on. Introduce him to anal and maybe a 3some.

Her son will end up in jail eventually from assaulting someone and she will just keep screwing Tim. Tim needs some pointers on meeting women and then Valerie will have to wait in line.

Keep going if you can develop a really good storyline. It's good as the tale goes with 2 chapters.

I'm looking to go out and get beat up by some guy with a MILF. Thanks for sharing :):)

but I'm the man who's tapping your mom, bitch!

my kind of revenge :)

Enjoyed it start to finish.. Well done...

I like it so far but you should defiantly keep going. I think there is so much you could add to the story

Since Val has come back of her own accord, there is MUCH you can expand on with this story.

She can fulfill HER needs as she transitions back into the dating world AND she can teach Tim how to be a better lover & instill confidence in him to pursue other females down the road & expand his own horizons.

You can always add a few paragraphs about her son picking on the wrong guy & getting his ass THOROUGHLY kicked......broken jaw, broken arms, brokens legs.....

YEAH, I can see that.........

This is a great story. Hope it continues

He needs to totally lick the taste right out of her asshole. Spread her cheeks wide and lick, suck and tongue fuck her tight little asshole until she comes.

Jason I'd like you to meet your new stepdad

To be honest I kind of saw where things were going, still I loved every second of it!

One thing that might be missing would be in chapter three, if there is a chapter three (please! please! pelase!). Would be for Jason to find out about his Mom and Timmy's 'relationship'. And I guess since Valerie had her tubes tied they could become untied, I guess that's a possibility.

Another 5 Star Rating! I favorited the story aswell (ch1 only since the list would fill up very fast if I add sequels).

Love it and would love to see more!

thanks for a fun story. I was hoping for the ending you gave it....

Great story, id Love to see a sequel with Kelly, the Bully’s girlfriend getting involved as well

Love this story :) Nice work, thumbs up :)

Better than the first.

Thanks for sharing.

Nice ending. Something like when it’s inevitable just take it and enjoy.

God I liked this story! You did an amazing job with the dynamic between the man two characters, I can’t wait to read more of your work.

Fucking hot, got my boner up and had a wank. Keep the story going please.

Oh man, SOOO good. Everything about it was just right. Thank you.

Barry

I don't usually listen to these type of stories, but you got me hook now. great story.

The story was fantastic and I was engaged into it. I could tell the more I read the better you are getting at telling a story. Well done (unlike my steak & eggs if your offering to send it!¡! 😶)

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