All Comments on 'jo4daddy Ch. 03'

You are a tease. I am enjoying it. You write very well.

Yeah your a crazy tease i just hope it dont take till chapter 100 for something to happen

The first three chapters are good only if you <u>get moving on the sex</u>! In my experience, though, long build-ups lead almost inevitably to a let-down (and I'm not a fan of bondage or dom/sub stories to begin with - I'm here for the incest). So far, this belongs in the <i>non-erotic</i> category.<br><br>If it pays off, though, it's <i>really</i> gonna be good!