All Comments on 'John and Melissa Ch. 01'

Please so hot! So good!!! More! Please!

That was quite good. Yes, please continue!

You must give us more!

Will be interesting to see how you further develop this.

an awesome very erotic story. brilliant story hot and very horny.

love it from start to finish. now what will the next parts bring.

Please keep it going! Also, describe her better, personality,body,hair,eyes.

A little short, but that just leaves us wanting more. Well written and a nice job of editing the material.

A smooth reading story that is very enjoyable, thanks for the post.

There damned well better be!

Great start, and loved how they did not have sex in the first chapter. This is how things normally would progress, not John being on top of her his first night home. Very nice touch with him taking that pillow, and him falling asleep to her scent. Hot and sexy.

you are a great writer i love the way she was ugly once and urned gourges after a yeaar

This an oldie but goodie and I was so happy to see some pillow masturbation. That totally rocks!!! Plus I love that he's a cop.

Too short, Nuff said, loved it but just 3 for brevity.

Loved this first chapter. I'm looking forward to many more!! Seems that both siblings have matured into very sexy and attractive looking catches (for each other!). Do they get even closer in Chapter 2? I hope so.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

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