All Comments on 'Josie and Me Pt. 05'

For a wonderful ride. Very good conclusion to a great series!

what a wonderful story. so loving.

Thank you

great ride and very nicely told thanks for your work. cant wait to see what you have in store for us next

I really thought the introduction of Dad into the Mix would be bad. From prior experience reading other Stories where they completely butchered the Scene.

yours not so much, slightly uncomfortable but good.

nice story liked it

Bit of a rollercoaster emotionally, particularly for those of us who have lost someone precious. However great story, I await your next with interest .

This series is one of the best written brother sister love stories that I have read here on Literotica. Please keep writing more stories like this. Especially with the happily ever after endings.

the first chapters were interesting and a good read. Not really into mother/son but got past it. I figured there would be reconciliation between the mom and dad but adding him as a sex partner ruined it for me. Especially after Josie and he decided that mom could only join if together but not separate. Then you have her leave him and go fuck dad for a whole night. That’s way more time than a screw in the backseat of the car. For me this killed the whole story. This sent the message that they weren’t truly as invested in one another as you spent the whole story building. It made it feel cheap and really did make Josie feel like a whore in every sense and turned him into more or less a cuck. Josie was his woman. Hypocritical, maybe. Just my opinion.

Didn’t really like the dad or mom getting involved but otherwise a very good story.

Second time reading this lovely story and it was just as great the second time through. The only observation in the end was Josie and Ronnie not having children as it would have been possible for them to have healthy kids provided the genetics were properly tested and there was no recessive genes present. Still a 5-star story and enjoyed the story again after reading it for the second time after 2 years.

And then it all goes to shit.