All Comments on 'Julia'
by Christie052780
- 14 Comments
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoq>"I'm a junior partner at my father's law firm."<Q
um, she seems a bit DIM to do that. i mean getting preggers was a bit dumb, like David mentioned - at 18 she didn't have to do that to go to her dad.
besides that, she doesn't seem to be all that gifted to go thru college AND law school WITH a kid as a single parent and become a law partner, even if it took her 10 yrs.....if you had just made her a secretary or paralegal at dad's law firm it woulda been better, more achievable and believable. IMHO.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoErr... she turned 18 - planned to have sex with a guy and then forgot about something called protection?!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI loved it! More of this quality, please.
Silly pair below - she mainly wanted to get pregnant - and he was a great lover, even if not a good father.
Lukas
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoWhat a great story! It would make more sense with the girl being 15-16 (a 17 yo girl would wait) but still, it is really great! The detail is awesomely impressive and it is amazing that you pack so much into so few words yet the story retains depth. Bravo!!!!!
- Tim
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoAnother great story from a truly gifted writer. John H
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI saw this same story on a different site and the original version makes more sense. Christie has to have the girl being 18 or Lit. won't post it (American laws I guess?). Still, even with the rewrite, it is a great story!!
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI already wanted to complain that there was no "need" to get pregnant since she turned 18, so it was good to have him tell her this later (so it's not a silly story, just a slly woman).
Anonymousover 13 years ago"Julia, some day you'll realize that you don't say things like that to a single man who just spent an evening watching porn while you've got nothing on under that robe. Now go to bed, " he drew in a breath for emphasis, "please."
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