All Comments on 'Just a Jab Ch. 03'

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

I guess the only suspense and drama in this story is about, . . .

how many of the women presented in this story will he end up fucking, and how many of them will end up pregnant. We already know the sex will be mind blowing, addictive, and insatiable. Did I miss anything?

GforGraham over 8 years agoAuthor

not serious

I love writing and want to enjoy the results of my labours. If I can put a little grin on someone's lips for just a moment then I am really happy. I call that a job well done.

QuestioningLit over 8 years ago

Awesome

Great writing. Awesome story and storyline. Really great characters. Can't wait to read the next 100 or so chapters. hint hint hehe

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Re: Your last line.

Yes I am enjoying reading your story immensely.

inno0cent_bystander about 1 year ago

This many years and NOBODY mentioned that you swapped John and Mike's names several times? I guess they all stopped reading by this chapter.

oksideshow859419 5 months ago

That was a great chapter bravo 👏👏👏👏

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