All Comments on 'Just a Jab Ch. 06'

I'm enjoying the theme/concept. 4 stars. I struggle with some of the writing.. Others have comment on your shifting "person" here is an example of in one half a paragraph you switch . tell me how is the "our" and the "me":

"Getting his mind back in the game he resumed his piston movements getting full benefit of his cock length with a controlled thrust. Sophia was moaning as she relished our threesome and stepped up her oral onslaught of Linda's snatch while also increasing her pressing back into me."

a quick proofreading can catch all of this. This is just one example.