All Comments on 'Just a Kiss Ch. 01.1'

I can't wait 'till they do it for real, it'll blow their minds to smithereens and all the trouble will just vanish. But these snippets of emotional exchange and torment are pure gold so just keep them coming, there is so much more behind it all than just sex and frustration!

5*

That was hot. Really when they get together it would be epic

I agree the others comments. I can`t wait for another chapter, where they come together in person, and fight for they relationship comes in advance.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

This story is so HOT and of course, brother and sister have crossed a line they can never go back from. Their deep love and desire will cause them to find a way to have sex soon and they will reach that orgasmic peak together. It will be so hot as where the climaxed twice so hard; in person it will be so erotic and such a hard cum - they'll never stop after that. This story is so full of potential. Cannot wait for a few more chapters for sure. Thanks !!

Hope u will have them fuck

Ugh, I wish she would have given into her desire/love...but then I guess the entire story would be shorter....and this was NOT the entire story, right? Please continue.

Thanks

5 Stars.

Please keep this story going. Get them together in person have them first make passionate love and then really take them to the point where it is just raw lustful fucking.

Really GREAT story. Thanks!

More please let there be more

PLEASE for gods sake finish this story.

I was shaking by the the end, I most

have more.

Chapter 2 is coming soon, which includes the big event, please hang in there.

and sloppy

we had drew?

we continued this form of communing for several days.

We did it twice?

Can't even rate this chapter

Can’t wait for the next chapter in

This could have been a 5/5. But you made it less than a page and didn't follow through with getting them into the same bed for full contact love making and orgasms while intimately coupled together. Three pages of love story would have earned you a five. You lost one point for extreme brevity. 4/5