All Comments on 'Just Easing the Pain?'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hello McFly? Your wife probably cheated

this is nt even close to the same thing. But it will sure be interesting to see who thinks the two acts are similar.

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Sure Terry as "looking" at the Message therapist while other men were looking at Carla in her sexy clothes.

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the message therapist went after Terry. But with Carla e SHE started the sexual contact.

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Carla LIED that she was injured then she tricked her husband and Danny.. then was in there for 90+ minutes.

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Not even close to the same thing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
difference

of course there was a difference. He was set up by his wife. Some would call it revenge, some might even say mental crualty or messing with his mind. However, he may not have deliberately set out to do it, but the fact remains that he allowed it to happen with Sofia, and not just once. OK, he tried to object the 2nd time but he mustn't have been very convincing after all. So, after the revelations, what happens now? Will it stop, will they continue on this "slippery" slope. Or are more revelations still to come about what (really) happened with carla, how far she (really) went. Cause it's just a story, why not write some sequel, if it's interesting enough.

stevieraygovanstevieraygovanabout 15 years ago
Very good tease.

I would be mad at the wife's deception, except she owned up to everything. She owned up to being turned on at the thought of Sofia lusting after her husband and she owned up to dressing sluttier at the gym in an effort to try to compete with Sofia. She owned up to getting wet and orgasming at Denny's spreading and voyuering of her pussy. She also ended up using these incidences to highten their own sex at home. She didn't merely use these revelations as weapons to punish Terry.<p>

Sure, it's a slippery slope and once Denny and Sofia get to comparing notes again it won't be long before they both step up their seductions of Carla and Terry. As long as Carla and Terry are honest with each other about what is happening they'll both see a huge increase in their attraction to each other; in addition to the excitement they'll get whenever they go to the gym. Carla will have to really step it up if she wants to be able to compete with the sexier Sofia and this will benefit everybody. The guys in the gym will love it. Denny will love it. Terry will love it. Most of all, Carla will learn to love it, and of course she and Sofia will end up getting together, with Sofia happily filling the role of Carla's sexual mentor.<p>

Hell, who knows, Carla might even learn to do more than the mere occasional "suckle." Once she hears about and finally sees for herself what Sofia does she'll see that she has to learn to give and enjoy giving (and receiving) full blown oral sex if she wants to compete with Sofia as a lover.<p>

It all sounds like a win-win deal here for everybody, but only if Carla and Terry are open and honest with each other about everything. If not, ie, if they begin to fall into a habit of wanting their cake without letting their partner know what's going on, they'll soon lose interest in each other, sexually. They'll each come to view their own partner as little more than an obligation and even a hindrance.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
Terry's massage hand job wasn't premeditated

Carla schemed and with vengeance brought sexual contact with her masseuse. Both were wrong in doing what they did, but it just seemes worse what she has done. Thanks for the good story,and hope to see some more of your work soon .....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
The power of the delete button.

Good tool that, for not accepting negative feedback.

magmamanmagmamanabout 15 years agoAuthor
I WILL delete

ALL comments that are just filth will be deleted. Constructive criticism I don't mind, but a very few of you are so over the top I just don't understand why you ever come in here.

So type that cr*p, waste your time. One click, all gone.

Besides, three posts by one anonymous JERK is too many.

MGM

bruce22bruce22about 15 years ago
Well Written

Actually, as long as they are talking every thing will be all right. I do think that Terry is very vulnerable with his difficulty in getting it up again. As soon as Carla discover a multiorgasmic man she will be long gone----

These things with loosening up boundaries are always dangerous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A 90 minute massage with a nude woman touching her

yeah reight. This was the second time the guy massaged her nude and set her off. This wasnt revenge it was sex for the wife. What happened to him was mostly by accident. What the wife did was predetermined by lie and deception. She basically betrayed her husband and humiliated him. It may sound a bit overboard but I think I would have divorced her for being overboard and overreacting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
And Your Purpose Was?

She was cucking him and he was helpless as you portrayed him.<P>

Is that what you wanted - a hopeless helpless wimp excited by his wife wanting another man she could respect?<P>

I thought you were beyond all that writer created disrespect and male humiliation excrement?<P>

You were credible and now this reversal - Why waste talent on the very few who don't need it or want it? A short stroke is all they want which many writers here can do that because they don't have any talent.<P>

More is expected of you as you both have talent and know how to use it. This was just a discredit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well done

You have a unique style and it is one I enjoy imensely.

ErotonautErotonautabout 15 years ago
Entertaining enough

A couple play with fire and get their fingers a little singed, but pull back before their relationship goes up in flames. Taking it further would be stupid, but it seems to have turned the heat up for now.

BetterEndingBetterEndingalmost 12 years ago
A Bit Much

If your desire was to end with a couple who had both gone a bit too far but were basically even, and opened themselves up to better communication and a better sex life, I think you failed a bit.

First, I guess it was appropriate for Carla to see Denny the first time to give Terry something to think about, even though 90 minutes seems very extreme. However, a second visit was over the top. Her excuse was that it was a follow up due to her injury. However, it was known by others at that point that the injury was faked. So why was Denny still giving it away free. Either he was helping Carla with revenge or had other motives or benefits in mind.

In the end, it was not clear whether they had learned their lessons and would no longer participate in such activities or if they felt like the excitement generated merited pushing the envelope further. If the latter, and that is the impression I had, then their relationship seems to be doomed.

Thanks for writing though. I appreciate many of your stories.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Temptation

Things went too far, but got fixed because two people wanted it fixed more than each wanted to 'win' the posturing game! And they genuinely liked each other!

5*

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
I agree about the temptation

I see it a little different, however. Time to find another gym because as long as they continue to patronize this one there is always the potential to cheat. A chapter 2 could clarify this.

phil2213phil2213about 11 years ago
Temptation Gym

This couple better find another gym. The story was hit Terry nearly crossed the line if not totally crossing. I guess that up to the reader's sense of morality. The core issue is allowing this massage to interfere with his marriage by his poor sexual performance with his wife due to his erotic massage. Terry didn't learn his lesson the first time testing fate and his wife's patience. Terry was absolutely violating his marriage and his wife. His brazen repeat was enough to set off any spouse in a normal relationship creating an aura of cheating and disrespect. His wife went tit for tat and fortunately held back from a full open revenge. Very intense full of emotion and great description. Nice job author!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
THE USUAL SLUT WHORE WIFE

GETTING HER ROCKS OFF AND THINK IS IS OK....I HATE FUCKING WOMEN WHO THINK IT OK TO CHEAT....LOUSY WHORES

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I dont agree with any of the comments.

Nothing would make me happier than to have my wife get a full service massage.

As long as they are doing whatever they do together, it isn't cheating. It is getting pleasure and there is nothing a couple should do more than wish their partner all the pleasure they can find, wherever they find it. There is only one trip around this life. A pussy is there to fuck, and a cock is there to give his women pleasure,. We were designed and built that way so as long as there is love, there should be no guilt.

krosis666krosis666almost 10 years ago
Sauce for goose

When one cheats, all bets are off. He cheated first, so he can't complain when she does. Both are worthless.

krosis666krosis666almost 10 years ago
Also

A lot of comments rightly condemn Carla's actions, but don't pretend Terry is an innocent victim. Yes, it was Carla's idea, and she did encourage Terry to go see Sofia, however he wasn't tied down, he wasn't helpless, and could have (and SHOULD have) gotten up and walked out as soon as Sofia became inappropriate. No victims here, each did what they wanted to do. As soon as Sofia touched Terry's cock, and got no complaint, he became complicit in cheating. The circumstances of how he arrived at the parlour doesn't matter, he had a choice, and chose to be intimate with a woman not his wife. So he deserves no pity.

Equally, Carla is as much to blame. Perhaps even a little more, since she saw how her husband was attracted to Sofia, and actively encouraged him to go for a session with her. Was it a set up? Perhaps. Maybe it was her plan to get with Denny, who knows, but he could have said STOP at any point along the way. Carla was becoming more and more exhibitionist and flirty with all the men, and it does seem likely that she DID have sex with Denny, as she set up that whole encounter, and seemed very enthusiastic about it, not as revenge, because she didn't seem overly angry at her hubby, but as if it was something she planned to do anyway. And Terry's actions gave her the excuse she was waiting for him to provide .

As I said previously, both are worthless cheaters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Example of typical attitude

Once again the burn da bitches, women are evil

and men are just upstanding examples. PLEASE.

The main character Terry got off having his junk

handled. Makes no difference if wifey sent him or

not. Did she say hey, go get a hand job, no, she

trusted him to be a real man and behave. Once

a man thought with the wrong head. Hey, what

a shocker, got away with it once, let's see what

happens a second time. He got busted.

Everyone of you great hemen would be

screaming for revenge on the wife, but when the

wife gets back a little of her own you all go ape

shit.

Let's face it, no matter how the story plays, the BTB

will always blame the woman.

fisheronefisheroneover 6 years ago
Revenge

What Terry did was wrong and he admitted to it. But Carla lieing about the injury and letting him see her nude and making her orgasm two sessions with husband waiting outside is wrong. Working out in a thong to boot for revnge is a bad thing. I am glad they overcame the trial but it would damage the relationship.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
PISSING THEM OFF AND CHALLENGING THEIR UNCOMMON SENSE

what do you expect for the next round, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
CUCKOLD

Terry came because of an erotic massage, I'm not so sure about Carla since shad hour and a half massage and Terry an unusual length of time since she faked the injury and Terry heard her moaning like she was being fucked. Tery went along with her explanation blindly, I think she cuckolded him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Two stupid people

"Yeah, go ahead and jerk me off. It'll be OK."

"Yeah, go ahead and rub one out for me. It'll be OK."

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
SEX

It seemed that nothing much happened just a little fondling. Anyway the staff had the reputation of the Gym to consider so nothing further happened other than a little teasing. No cuckolding and no cheating although the situation lead to the suspition that there was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really?

If people think this is not sex they are more stupid than a rock

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Another ridiculously stupid pile of shit from this idiot.

TajfaTajfaalmost 4 years ago

Firstly he should have apologised for what he did and should have promised it would never happen again. He was wrong to have allowed that to happen. Then she lowered herself to his level by deliberately being provocative and allowing sexual touching as revenge. This behaviour never works. They are both cheaters and should be ashamed. Then for him to get excited by hearing what she had done was the beginning of the end. This will escalate until one of them realises they have lost what love they had for their spouse and decide to divorce. Just a pair of sad people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
very good story

You are drawing a lot of emotion so I guess you hit your mark.

As for the subject matter it is really close in my opinion to where two wrongs don't make a right. They need to stop.

If it were real life and it were me once she said she was getting a massage from that guy I would be there and sit in the room. Don't care how much she objects. I would say if you don't want me there then this has nothing to do with any kind of therapy, its all revenge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The Rubicon has been crossed. Maybe they manage to stay together for another year but probably not that long. It is a shame they both chose to squander the value of their relationship in which they both had invested so much time and energy.

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