All Comments on 'Justine Ch. 13'

Oh they are in way over their heads! I love this story. Thank you for sharing with us. I wonder who will get the revenge..the Queen, her mother or David. Either way the kidnappers are so screwed without the KY gel.

~~DracosBaby

I wonder just how powerful Josephine will be. I love the tie-in with your other stories.

Just one thing, you mixed up Justine and Josephine a couple of times, but other than that wonderful story :)

was an very entertaining chapter love hoe Josephine is not acting the normal role of the victim and trying to be proactive in her rescue. I think the two cousins are in big trouble.

I wonder what the future will hold for David and her and lastly it was nice to hear from Maurice and family again

Aside from being Justine's mother, who is Josephine?

I think Kal's second calling is designing roller coasters. With all the twists and turns her stories give us the ride is phenomenal.

Anyone have any pity for Jeremiah and Nappy?

I didn't think so. I don't.

Thank you!

M1

Four pages! Wowee!! Love that Josephine's getting stronger and knowing it. She'll make sure David feels a little stressed but she loves him and he was kind to her. She'll keep him around.

Please give us a small view of the other Josephine and Napoleon. I'd like to see if she levels out too.

And thanks for the tie in with the Delgados and Gremlins. I love how you did that!

That is getting to juicy and you tied one of your other stories to this story wow!! I cant wait to read more keep it coming and please let mother and daughter find each other in the next story

As usual Brilliant. It's Great that your blending other Character's from your other stories. Can't wait for the follow up

Really great update. I loved the fact that you revisited the Delgados and the whole group from New Orleans. I cant wait to see how Justine responds to finding out that she is Queen of Queens. I actually laughed out loud when you described how Maeve treated Old Jerry for what he did to her. Balls the size of oranges!! PRICELESS!! Can't wait for the next update.

BUDDHA

Wanted to use a different expletive but I held back:-) Without a doubt the best chapter yet!! I hope chpter 14 doesn't get held up for 2 weeks like 13 did. I was on pins and needles since I knew it had been submitted but had tech issues. I love this story...just keeps getting better and better.

Yes that you tied in Maurice and that whole group into this chapter. Since I'm new to reading your stories it was a great surprise to read of characters I had already read about. Made me feel like I had been reading you longer and wasn't such a newbie. And as for this story, NO. You get such enjoyment from leaving the best cliffhangers. David answering a call from Joe and you stop their. At least we know that the Justine and David are so special that they rule for eternity, or at least until someone finds a way to kill them, good luck w/that though. I can't wait to see what happens next as long as you share the phone call w/us brat.....hehe-he

Hey Kal,

You kept us all refreshing the Lit pages every day, I know I did ;-). Another good story, thank you.

I think the award for the queen in cliffhangers should go to you. Definitely. Don't wait too long to update us with the next chapter. And wonderful to see Regina, Maurice and the crew involved with this story. What to expect....

Keep it coming!

As always, u give out the goodies with extra sauce... Love the sex scene btw justine n quinn....

Tnks n pretty plllllssssd update soon...

Since you keep us hangin in suspense i'll say this...no warning guys...just get a umbrella and hang on!

if this was amovie i would watch it over and over again.

Kal, thank you for another amazing chapter. WOW! Adding Maurice, Regina, Gremlin, and everyone was such a great touch!!! Keep up the amazing work!

Wow is all I can say right now!!! Is the momma gonna be a superpower too!?! WOW!!!

When I read the words New Orleans I got the biggest grin. I loved "Maurice" so thanks for bringing him & the rest into this story, even if its for a lil bit. As always wonderful job.

~LadySilverNova~

Wow! I was wondering when Maurice and Regina were getting back in a story! I just love how Kal blends in the sories. Can't wait for the new Chapter! Its awesome reading. Well done! Ann133

Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!

Was very well written! I look forward to more great stories from you, and soon;-)