All Comments on 'Kate and Connor Ch. 01'

How can such love between two adults be wrong. Keep Writing!

Can't wait for chapter 2!

You should try and get in contact with an editor, or at least use spell check. Your story is good, but those errors are distracting, and that can ruin a perfectly good story by bringing people out of their mental visualizations. I do see you being a good writer here though

A near perfect story. Really. The guy was the kind of guy only girls or guy men seem to know how to create. Just the right amount of masculinity, just the right amount of sensitivity. The girl was alright too, maybe still a little too fragile for my taste, but way better than the sluts and simpering Barbie's I've seen around here. You've got to write more. No condom, huh... playin' with fire aren't ya, and it sure is hot!

I love reading about brothers and sisters finding love and pleasure together. Very nice.

Your writing style is really wonderful. I agree with the previous poster, spell check and an editor would make it perfect! Please keep up the good work and hurry with part 2!

The characters were very well defined right out of the gate, not the generic cookie cutters that populate too many of the stories here. The tragic loss of their parents had been slowly drawing them closer together until the tipping point was reached when Connor had his near-accident beneath the car. I can't wait to read on.

I really loved this story not so much because of it's theme but because of the build up of characters and very hot sex.

Good storie read it before but I read so much sometimes I read same books and stories.Sometimes by accident other times I just havn't read in a while .Worth the read again thanks keep up the good work.

no way to praise such a wonderful story - boo hiss

I loved this…5 stars…!!!

I loved this…5 stars…!!!