All Comments on 'Kathlyn Ch. 01 - Cousin w/ Benefits'

Quick, simple, straightforward. Not bad - if it's just supposed to be a stroke story, it fulfills its purpose. But we've seen this story many times before, it's just so forgettable.

Give us something to distinguish yourself from the crowd.

Good storyline. Grammar needs a lot of work as well as sentence tense. Get an editor to help.

The parents had to know this would happen right otherwise they would have stopped letting them sleep in the same bed at puberty.plus the way they were dressed in front of him.

...in English!

Part 2 please what was the aftermath

I agree..The parent had to have some idea. You do not put 2 beautiful, horny teenagers in the same bed and not expect something to happen.

They had loved each other a cousins for many years. It is only natural that something sexual might happen.

I did this at a younger age. Me & my brother took turns with a slightly older cousin who wanted to show off what she knew. I'd fuck her then he'd fuck her then we put both our cock heads in her mouth at same time. My brother ended up pissing in her pussy.

To the anonymous comment about taking turns with a cousin....me and my brother did the same thing with a cousin who thought she was more experienced than us..we were just rubbing our cocks on her pussy at first..then my brother got about half his cock in her against her wishes..so on my next turn i begged her to let me do the same..she finally said ok, just half..i did, but kept going in and out..she said "no fucking, only feeling what it's like"..i kept going though, and she started grinding back..i banged it till i came in her..then she was pissed. Never got to again.

The best pussy i have ever had was my cousins .