All Comments on 'Keeping the Soldier Girl'

excellent story and so many possible ways to continue. Thanks for the entertainment Mike from Texas.

Would love for the story continue, but regardless if it does, it is worth the read.

So poorly written I couldn't make it past the second paragraph. Grammarcheck would have cleared up at least half of the errors, had the author cared enough to use it.

Although I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I hate when authors have mistakes in the VERY FIRST SENTENCE OF THE STORY. It didn't take away from the quality of the story in my opinion, but made me respect the story less.

Brushing the the grammer mistakes aside it was an entertaining, well thought out tale worthy of anyone's time to read and enjoy it.

This story's premise is one I have often thought about and this story made it come to fruition.

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

Brushing the the grammer mistakes aside it was an entertaining, well thought out tale worthy of anyone's time to read and enjoy it.

This story's premise is one I have often thought about and this story made it come to fruition.

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

Do more, I love it!

This is a great start. What happens next?