by AllenWoody
I've never read something that clicked with me like this one in years. Everything's just right. Awesome, sexy characters, and I love the ideas! Really good work.
Loved your story. Your writing is excellent....perfect imagery mixed with sexy dialogue between the characters. Thank you for sharing!
I am very grateful for those of you that have read my story, rated it, and especially those who have commented. I'm a slow writer; it takes me months to complete a story like this. It's very rewarding to see favorable reactions to something that I put so much effort into. Thanks!
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You writing was captivating and drew me into the story like spiders web.
Thank you for wring this very well written piece.
I love young uppity Girls, that finally get put into their natural place by a mature male, so Hot. Five stars, and thanks for it.
You do this so well! I love how it never happens to the nice ones, just the cocky ones used to having it all. And he's a professor too?! Hot!
Love the story, love the ending. As a hiker myself, it made I more fun. But I’d NEVER abandon my woman.
I like the dubcon/reluctance elements that play on his refusal to play Kelli's manipulation games. One gets the sense that the only choice she really has is the length of rope he is willing to pay out.