All Comments on 'Kylie's Song Ch. 03'

Great story on so many levels. All three story posts were really sexy and creative. Adding Shauna was promising and the epilogue suggested the promise was kept and I love reading about a woman’s inner conflict as they are seduced - good job. However, ‘for me’ some of the fetish extremes were a little distracting. There were too many of them and they only served to remind me this wasn’t real. But my only real disappointment was the ball-gags when K & S were tied face to face. It felt like a missed opportunity for them to really bond. With sweat slick bodies, no gags and a little slack on the restraints would have left them powerless to resist each other. 4 Stars

It really hit the sweet spot for me. I like a lot of your stories, but some of them are a bit too "hard" for me. This one had just the right amount of good role play from the characters And remainders that it was in fact role play.

THIS is the perfect imagining of what dominance and submission can look like in the context of a F/F/M threesome. It's edgy at times but it has the intimacy there too. I'm enjoying your work as I just discovered you on this site. Keep it up!!

Not only very original but totally erotic in a uniquely sadistic but thrilling way. Thanks!