All Comments on 'Landlady Clare Ch. 01'

Super double-plus good. I'm working on a somewhat similar story that I will soon start posting. But I'm happy to run across your work. Well done. 5 stars and a favorite. I am sure that I and your other followers look forward to a chapter 2.

Arsenique - Thank you so much for your kind comments. Chapter Two is in the works. Please be patient, I write very slowly.

Really well constructed story, beautifully crafted. Only slight, pedantic quibble, one takes one's "cue" not "queue". But, doesn't take anything away from what I believe will be a great series.. Tha

Thank you for this and please keep up the great work.

Ever since I read the Mistress Doreen series, you have been one of my two favourite, erotica, authors and you have not let me down at all with this first part of the new series.

Peterhu148 - Thank you for your generous comments. You are of course correct 'cue/queue'. Your response to my writing encourages my future endeavors.

My favorite part of this story is Ch. 01. Hoping to enjoy the next one soon. You’re a great writer who can capture the emotions of a power dynamic. Well done.

Superb!

Exceptional start, hope there will be quite a few additional chapter to this story...

Thank you so much for your kind comments. Chapter Two is in the works.

Magical story and very well written- oddly I was able to control my own cock. Looking forward to part 2 and losing control

Totally hot! 5/5