All Comments on 'Last Straw Ch. 02'

Very well written, well developed story line. Good length to story and very believable. Can't wait to read more from you.

Leaving that door in the closet leads me to believe there will be a Ch.03 to this WONDERFUL story. I'll be looking for it.

The sensually worded story flows.

The sum of your efforts was a nice story, worth reading. Thank You. Ronnie W.

hot stuff . give us more

As usual, you get a 5 for this story. It's very readable, believable and totally sexy. That's some great sex between a son and his mom, just like most of us guys wish we could have had. Thanks for much more than the normal slam/bam get your rocks off stories found in abundance.

A very good loving story, the sex between mom and her son was erotic and hot.

Well written and edited that made for a smooth read.

A very sweet love story with a hopeful ending that mom and son will eventually get back together.

Thanks for the good read.

A little sad that they had to part but it was realistic that they do.

A very good read, thanks

I liked the story. I just wish the characters had used more dirty talk when fooling around. I love hearing that.

This could have been one of the greatest mom son loving tales IMO.

I LOVED the plan the two came up with to keep their liaisons a secret.

I LOVED the scene in the car.

And I absolutely LOVED the two swearing to each other that they would be faithful to each other, come what may.

Which is why the last section was SUCH a downer. Charlie got Kate. Linda got Bryon back in the sack. Great. But none of it compares to the two being together. IMO, Linda divorcing Bryon and moving in with Charlie a few hundred miles away would have been so, so good.

But hey, it's your story. I loved it, and I will continue to love it. 5 stars and I hope you will write more. You seem to pop up after a gap of a few years (2004 / '08 /'10). I'm hoping '16 marks your return.

Mom and Charlie know what they both want. Some don't like the anal thing but I say It's the best. We certainly enjoy this. When he went off in her Butt so did my man. 5 Stars and I'm seeing stars.

TBC

Still a good story , but not great as it could have been. Read both parts and judge for yourself,you may like it................. Thanks for the read.

the story was good. but the ending left was not good. they should have been together, charlie should have been in love with his mother. but he goes and fell in love with another girl. fucker

(11/20/2022) Poignant. This is what happens when reality sneaks in to a fantasy. Five stars for both chapters.

The ending was a surprise for me. I fully expected the husband to continue his downward spiral and drop off the story, leaving the kingdom wide open for Charlie.

A glimmer of hope remains, however, with the hole in the closet still open. Perhaps Chapter 3 will feature an orgy between both couples; Bryson with Kate, Charlie with his mother and back again!

I really liked the story, but was surprised by the ending.

They had such a strong relationship and such good energy together, it's a real shame to have it stop just because he had to move away for work.

You have to wonder if Byron, given a second go, will remain on the up and up and love her properly the way she should be.

Personally, I think that she should've moved away with him, and left Byron to find his own way into a new life and a fresh start. Maybe even with Kate.

They were a well fit couple and thankfully, monogamous to boot. I think they're both going to regret not continuing with their love. I know I do.

Sincerely,

B4PW.